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Digital Cause
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30-07-2006 12:21 |
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Bulls-I
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Like the intro drums very much, but i think the moment where the beat falls in, it should be a bit harder, louder snares, maybe some layers, the bending synth in the first half of the song is a bit too repetitive i think,the drums of the second part i like more but i should make the kick more heavy, more kinda distortion like, the synth is very catchy and nice, just needs some changement during the song, nice work!
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30-07-2006 13:47 |
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cynik
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this starts off pretty scary, nice atmophere.
oh man don't like that kick at all, really weak. needs more layers to punch through, sounds like you haven't done any eqing?
that bassline is interesting, something different. but it sounds weak too, in fact I'd rechoose the sounds for the entire track and beef them up. sorry man but it simply doesn't work, I like the ideas beneath though.
a really good atmospheric part at 3:30, but you drop it too soon IMO. oh no a bd bd buildup. oh but the drop itself is very nice!
this gets a bit droning too, the breakdowns are too long with not enough new to keep me interested. 7:43 is too long
I'm really liking the ideas behind but the weak sounds you used simply ruin it for me. sounds like you're not that far into production at this point? what software you working in?
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30-07-2006 19:15 |
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Digital Cause
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30-07-2006 21:51 |
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Digital Cause
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Teaching myself Cubase at the moment also, but reason is just really fast for me cos I know it really well
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30-07-2006 21:52 |
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cynik
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30-07-2006 23:00 |
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Digital Cause
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do you use reason, Cynik?
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31-07-2006 11:19 |
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cynik
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31-07-2006 11:50 |
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Digital Cause
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iD Quite like to touch it up me self, so basickly stronger kick and snare, and more powerful sound, and then theres the arrangement factor, which Im not too sure about, I think a lot of dnb is fairly repetitive, such as not that fucking sick choon on the moonway renegade noisia record, but the A side, anyway, fatter sounds yes? I think the bass could do with a bit less compression?
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31-07-2006 17:47 |
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cynik
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ah yes the Facade tune, for such an awesome groove in a track some constant beat changes as variation wouldn't even work - would be counterproductive IMHO.
I don't see why you compressed the bass anyway. what version of Reason are you using? anyway add me up on either messangers man, we're cluttering your track thread
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31-07-2006 18:14 |
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