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BattleDrone 
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That sounds really pro man! But is definately missing identity...
Some bass sound (but no sub as you have a sub all over) that plays a nice hook with a lot of variations would do the trick I think. It would also be great to drop the sub in the middle part as it gets boring if it's played all the time.
For more variation you could add some one-shots or some sound-FX (or whatever, just experiment a bit and don't be afraid to try something crazy).
If you wanna go Liquid (which seems an obvious option from what I heard) you could add some vocals. The better liquid track does have some nasty elements in it though.
Maybe you should make a little remix competition out of this... 
Looking forward to hear future versions of this track.
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25-07-2006 00:43 |
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yeah this sound's beuty,..very pro indeed,..just don't dig the drum's,..sound to sluggish,..but everything els sound's big,..crazy pan's n all,...anyway, I'd slap a bongo's loop in there for bit's,..and maybe try layering a filtered break to add more ghost's,..tune's a treat,..cheers
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25-07-2006 03:56 |
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BattleDrone
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Cool, just enough touch and identity to give it a little rough edge and still keep it loungy.
Please post some tracks on this site when the new server is up. This sample is promising.
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25-07-2006 19:01 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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I actually don't care for the changes you made in the 2nd version...
seemed more cohesive to me before, even if it didn't have much direction in the 1st version. I think that a lot of the fx you added dont seem to fit well.
Your production overall sounds excellent, but I don't care for your drum sounds. They are a bit bland and the hits you have chosen do not seem to compliment that nice sub and vibe you have going in this track. I would prefer a bit fatter drum hits that are very clean for this kind of track. equipped's idea of a bongo loop may be a good one as well
I think that if you keep a more minimal sound, choose fx that fit a bit better and carefully plan drops and an intro/ outro, you'll have a real nice track.
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26-07-2006 06:15 |
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StyLespOoL
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