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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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dude ; not tryin to be harsh here ; but u fucked up the classic
it's a good tune ; had lot's of potential ; but seriously that vocal don't work on that beat
i mean it's right on the spot an all ; but u forgot to always keep track of the original beat when buidin yours (if u don't want to timestrech)
(even v-snares kept the original beat in his rmx ; just layerd it an filled up spaces (in theory that is))
i'd ditch the vocal an repost the tune without it
(the end i think is real nicely done (the" hot of a di press / dance jump up to dis stutters"
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keep at it jungalist
__ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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