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BeatJunkie 
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bump cuz of the lack of response. anyone?
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19-07-2006 12:35 |
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broadside
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intro was cool,
tho i thought cos of the intro it was gonna lead to some more complex old school jungle type of beats, so i was a littel dissapointed by the standard drums that come in, plus they would sound better in this context a little clearer imo
when the thing drops i liked the sort of restrained creepy bassline, again i thought quite old school for some reason, but it doesn't really go anywhere after that though. still tho, not a bad start. (hope im reviewing the right track)
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19-07-2006 13:14 |
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cynik
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I HATE the myspace player. it sometimes refuses to work properly on my computer..
ok I can hear substantial Teebee influences which is all good in my book.
the fx you put are sounding cool but maybe a bit abrupt at places, after in the breakdown
productionwise this could be more crisp thugh you meybe went on that dirty sound on purpose
ok it now stopped and only plays little chunks.. stops.. plays a bit more.. FFS it buffered the whole track, I don't understand.
make it downloadable and I'll get back with a more detailed review
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19-07-2006 13:18 |
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BeatJunkie
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First, many thanks for taking a second to listen and give feedback. fixed.... it's now downloadable... (dunno why it wasnt before)
@broadside: yeh subbass is one of the more difficult things for me to do. and im currently re-doing this tune with a different main beat... thx for the review.
@ cynik: now downloadable... i know im no comparison, but just the fact that u mentioned Teebee in your review makes this n00b feel good. 
im trying to work on this tune some more...
thx for the review guys.... i know im not as known in here as the others, so thx a million/.
cheers
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19-07-2006 15:55 |
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cynik
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get outta here you s00per n00b 
anyways
that intro beat is a bit over distorted, go easy on it
the reece which you used just doen't sit right, re eqing might help or even switching for a different sound
the buildup is pretty much non-existant, maybe a hint of the bassline we're gonna hear could work here
drops: beats are some nice chunky mothers. the bassline is proper early teebee although it could use with a twist here n there, feels droning a bit
is that radio vocal saying "pussy" or "disease" or both
ok I hear now whats the problem - echoes on the fx are totally out of place, personally I'd sync those with the bpm
this has perspective as heard in that main loop but try reworking those sounds / work on fitting them better
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20-07-2006 00:25 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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I like the feel of this track.
Your main break is way too distorted. I'd take it easy on the distortion. Use some subtractive EQ instead to make your break snap more instead of that distortion. Also compressing the break sparringly will help give that loud effect I think you are going for.
The bass also doesn't seem to sit in the mix well. Again, I believe it is a tad too much distortion, or it could just be turned up loud
Even though this isn't the best idea, I find sometimes compressing the entire track can work when everything is too distorted. Just don't use it as a crutch.
I'd remove that vocal sample from jungle warfare also, it has been thoroughly rinsed.
Keep at it, the structure of this song is sound, you just need to work out some production issues IMO.
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21-07-2006 02:34 |
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BeatJunkie
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well thank you for your review. yeh i finally got a midi keyboard and im devoting more time to writing, so my stuff will soon improve i think.
thx for the feedback
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21-07-2006 12:44 |
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Arkitekt
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sup mate?? nice intro.. like the percussion in the backround.. although the drums kinda drown it out.. and the drums sound really distorted imo.. good feel to th track.. i think the percussion gives it god motion but they need variation just like everything else.. 
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21-07-2006 23:08 |
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BeatJunkie
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ez Arkitekt.....yeh everyones said theres too much distortion, ill ease up on it...thx for takin a sec to review my latest project.
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22-07-2006 09:58 |
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BeatJunkie
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| Originally posted by cynikis that radio vocal saying "pussy" or "disease" or both
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hahaha, now that i listen, i can hear what u mean.. hehe,
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