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BeatJunkie 
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You can find it here: Razor's Edge (incomplete) it's the 1st tune.
I started this bit last night. It's quite different than my last stuff. Kinda simple, but 'catchy' Not even sure if I'll finish this one. Any advice/feedback? thx in advance.
ez, B
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05-07-2006 11:13 |
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BeatJunkie
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O yeh, I have FL6 now, and a bunch of plugins. That's all the gear I have.
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05-07-2006 11:15 |
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Rudeone
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needs some more fills, mids, progression, arranging. i like it, but theres a lot of work to do :-)
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05-07-2006 12:05 |
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BeatJunkie
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1st: thanks alot for takin a second to listen AND give feedback. yeh as i said, i jus started it, its kinda hollow, just wanted to see if ppl thought it was total crap or if it could be rolled out. This isn't really how I wanna sound, but its what came out of my head. ill work on it some, thx again!
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05-07-2006 12:12 |
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Glim
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yeah man, like this intro, those squelchy bass sounds )if thats what they are) sound great, love the drums that start, very clear and punchy!!
edits on the breaks makes it easier to listen to and avoids soundin too repetative too quickly, not sure about the texture of that b-line, i mean the melody is cool but it needs to be grimed up a little bit more, make it more rougher..
for me the drums make this tune and if you want my advice id say what you've got here is worth carrying on with to make it into a full track, although do something different with that b-line, at times there jus aint much else and it sounds too clean, maybe add some high or mid reece sounds or synth over the top working into the melody of the b-line.
solid production wise
looking forward to hearin more from you mate
cheers
G
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05-07-2006 12:37 |
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BeatJunkie
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Thanks alot Mista Glim. Yeh, the bass line is very weak..... i kinda threw it together, subbass is very difficult for me. I dunno how to achieve a solid dutty subbass, if i get it to sound low, it gets muddy. or it clips.... ive tried using samples and ive tried usin my softsynths.... dunno what to do... any advice..
and THX again for the review Glim..... anyone else?
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05-07-2006 12:46 |
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It does have a catchy groove,..still a bit to clean n empty soundin,..but you don't want to over do it with load's of shit,.cause in my experiance these type of groove's, groove best when kept simple,...This is so well layed out, that id finish it forshure,...i'd start with addin some mashed up crusty vocal's,.. to give thing's a cheeky edge,..and some big ass distorted bass automating it's way under the track,..there's a producer on here that did exzactly what im tryin to say,..with the bass,..when i find the tune i'll send it to ya if you want,.."Stutterstep" was his producer name ,..tune was called "StabZ"..Anyway you've got a potentially sick track on your hands with some more work,..keep at it the filth,..cheers.
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05-07-2006 14:52 |
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BeatJunkie
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why thank you for the review... yeh the bass needs alot of work... thx again, ill try n work on this 1.
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05-07-2006 16:06 |
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