Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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cool sounds here mate
Whoa starts off all rnb-ish which i can dig on occasion, really like the piano in the loop, all elements sound a bit distant, is this the intention? maybe bring them into the tune more as it rolls on... i was expectin some dnb style beatz by now??...
the vocal in it is it you? if so doing more bits would sound good, oh hang on i get it this is an instrumental.. kk. well it does the job, i can freestyle nicely over it, why not have a bridge in that i mean a change for 8 bars or whatever, its the basics but this type of music is like that an if your makin instrumental its all about standin out, the change you got in there dont last long enough to be able to have a good lyrical change imho...
PS Beat is the better one of the two, gone for the eminem toy soldiers style drum rolls etc which i like, this one stands out, s are you playing those guitar parts?? if you are i'd love to collab with you o a track like this , i play guitar an could add some wicked additions to the melodys.
well anyway mate, got two solid instrumentals here but PS Beat is the one that i'll remember more in my head
hope this is useful to you
peace
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