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mj99968548
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Hi folks
Just created a new track called "Winds Of Change",
http://www.myspace.com/cyborgevolution
Feel free to listen and will be gratefull for any feedback. Again, bigup to the jemone, with his knowledge id be fooked.
Peace
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27-06-2006 19:27 |
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jemone 
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ha ha
thanks for the big upz mate, but your proggression is your own, keep at it mate, if you look back at your older stuff you can see good progress, as everyone knows this production game aint easy, and the more tunes you make the better youll get,
big upz mj, keep em coming
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28-06-2006 09:47 |
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mj99968548
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28-06-2006 17:28 |
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Rudeone
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like your drums cool programming. sounds and style also sounds very nice to me. maybe up it somewhere in good quality if you want further tipps on this tune.
you need to work on your arrangement imo. concentrate on the main intention of the tune and phatten things up.
well done though
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28-06-2006 17:39 |
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mj99968548
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thanks for the advice, rudeone
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28-06-2006 18:15 |
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cynik
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28-06-2006 21:29 |
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theres not realy any drop to it, and the drums at the start are 2 slow for me, if i was you id use the drum loop near the end at the start of the tune and make a drop instead of introducing bass with out no clear build up.
you use some cool sounds i feel u gota work abit on structure
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28-06-2006 22:33 |
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jemone
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cynik
youve been infected by the onion fiend lmao,i think if you look youve posted on the wrong track, i see you mention tortured souls, and a reesce, well i thought i cant hear that in here, then i saw another post on the producers board by beat junkie, with a track entitled totured souls, i take it this is the track you refer too, ha ha ha. young cyborg here needs advice on his work as we all do at some point, i myself have given some asdvice on filters, distortion, edits etc, but i thinks he is struggaling with structure, obviously ultimately, it comes down to our own learning, we cannot be taught how to make drum and bass step by step, like a cake recipee, but i do see a passion in the boy,and a yearning to learn, so if he keeps rocking i feel it will only be a matter of time for him, keep stepping on cyborg, and any advice you lot think could be imparted to him feel free, im sure it will all be a help to him.
long live the people of the banging drum and the stringy bass thingy 
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29-06-2006 09:02 |
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29-06-2006 09:18 |
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BeatJunkie
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Nice drum edits. The b-line is nice too. Kinda reminds me of Ed Rush and Optical in the intro, Then the bass changes....eeeeh sounds more 'jazzy' now. Needs more of a drop imo. Dunno what your style is really, but you should make this one nice n grimey. Phatten up the drums and make it more percussion driven. Too much reverb (i guess) on the drums..... these are only my opinions, sounds good overall tho. Keep it up.
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29-06-2006 09:25 |
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mj99968548
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thanks for all the adivce guys, i'll take it on board and make the changes in the next tune.
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29-06-2006 18:41 |
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Some Beuty sounds at the intro,...those glass sounds,..solid job with them,..maybe add a layer here n there that's been filtered,..and fad it in and out with what's allready there,...jazz bass is sick,...all your sound's are meaty,..sounds like there's a slight reverb on the whole mix when that amen drop's,..id loose that,..if that's what it is,..hot dam some sick shit with them edit's,...yeah you've fore shure improved,..sounds like you 've got a dam good ear for makin music,..some complex shit in this,..cheers bud.
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29-06-2006 20:03 |
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listenin to this again,..dig that train sample,..and the vocoder thing is nasty,..as i said before this is a complex track,..so much goin on,..nice work.
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29-06-2006 20:23 |
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mj99968548
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Thanks equipped for the tips and encouragment, i'm gonna try make some improvement on my next track and focus on some arrangment skills and more engineering techniques, got to say i like ur new track "Hope Your Well" pretty nice and chilled and nice bline, like the way you incorporated the vocals.
Peace
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29-06-2006 21:12 |
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epic feel to this, some parts could do with more reverbs when they get louder, too wet if thats the expression, nice loop filtered comin in,,
breaks develop into some real funky shit man, i can hear your breakage influcence here
whoa that bassline is acidy to fuck man, maybe bring it in sooner and its too loud imo..
although the overall feel i get in comforting man, coz its like oldskool ed rush n optical vibes, that double basss line that comes in sounds wicked but too much like another tune or is this meant to be the actual drop?/ work it into the other acidy bassline imo..
hehe again changing the theme to amens bashing shizzle, its all good tho man, real oldskool vibe to this which i alwayz like these days
nice one man
keep rinsin
G
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mj99968548
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