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Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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again some mroe updates.. still not finished...a lil stuck with this one... but soundin good... give it a listen... Drummer

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29-05-2006 01:55
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ok mang as I told you lovin the vibe in this, it's got a kind of a dark uncomfortable tension about it..

glitchy drums are spot on but tend to go offbeat not in a good way. I'd go for a bit tighter approach. the synths in the intro are warm and subtle

the drop is powerful, good beats. sharp turns with the synths is a good opposition to the intro.. good stuff. the bass which enters next is a bit overpowering everything else

the tension is more prominent in the breakdown with the cool little intelligent edits and bitcrushed stuff..

not your usual thing but I like it very much. the tension it creates with the contrasting parts is great. finish 'er

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30-05-2006 09:54 Homepage of cynik
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here we go...

intro is nice....drums are great! nice variation in them, they really sound great

not so sure about those weird sounds you put in at 1:30, they dont really fit in imo

lots of chaos! filled with loads of different sounds and noises, i like it

yeah yeah yeah...

the drop at 3:40 could have a bigger buildup imo

hm ok the chaos is a bit too much now, altho i guess its part of the tune

overall: very nice! will play this a lot, keep up the good work Rinse
30-05-2006 11:19
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intro soundin quite allrite ;
drop @ 01:27 is massive Bigup
as cynik mentioned allready the glitchy drumz tend to go offbeat now an then
altough here an there it's right on the spot
nice drumeditz an fuckin great soundquality
2nd drop @ 3:40 is good ;
i'd turn up the hi's an mid's on that reece also
nice track can't wait for the full version of it Big Grin

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30-05-2006 11:32 Homepage of baz
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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cheers glad you guys took the listen... im workin on finishin it...its just taking lots of time Frown but its getting there...

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31-05-2006 07:05
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the intro is fucking great!

breakdown is kinda strange. the drop and the mainpart is a lil bit weak compared to the slammin intro. sick edits very nice!!

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dynamic wise... how can an intro be slammin and a drop be weak?? just a thought...

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01-06-2006 20:50
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dynamic wise... how can an intro be slammin and a drop be weak?? just a thought...


of course its bigger than the intro, but i was expecting more. its just how i felt the track

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01-06-2006 20:53 Homepage of Rudeone
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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quote:
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dynamic wise... how can an intro be slammin and a drop be weak?? just a thought...


of course its bigger than the intro, but i was expecting more. its just how i felt the track


thats cool man... its all in how you listen.. but considering that the intro doesnt remotely have whats going on that the drop... that doesnt make any sense to me.. thats all..

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02-06-2006 04:29
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maybe play with one of your midrange and introduce it via lopass in the breakdown. lil pieces of your grimey mids would do good on the drop imo. some more hi's on the mid in the mainpart maybe. or more pressure on the bass, dunno.

the "tough" vocal is damn sweet.

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Nice tune - feeling the choppiness..

Up to first break is fairly standard - first drop is nice but the low end doesn't really match the presence of the high FX elements, if you know what I mean.

Like the glitchy stuff - use of the Akuma breaks pack is fairly obvious though..

Liek the tune itself.. overall shape, melodic theme etc..

2nd break is good.. 2nd drop too. I would question the levels again but aside from that good work!


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Like the glitchy stuff - use of the Akuma breaks pack is fairly obvious though..


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Of course Big Grin ...akuma breaks are fresh...

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03-06-2006 19:14
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