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marcthebeat 
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Hey Guys, hope you are well.
Been working on this one for a while now.. would be interested in hearing what you think. I've got some new hosting now so there should be any access problems.
Enjoy!
marcthebeat - Every Word
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27-05-2006 19:14 |
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Surya
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Well, I have to admit it's quite well made, but I hate it. Sorry.
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29-05-2006 08:51 |
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marcthebeat
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Originally posted by Surya
Well, I have to admit it's quite well made, but I hate it. Sorry. |
Haha - thanks for being so honest. Was there anything about the tune in particular that grated or is just a feeling you have.
Easy,
mtb
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29-05-2006 10:38 |
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Surya
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The whole concept of these vocals driving the whole track. To me DnB is about grimey basses and punching beats. This track is about the vocals. And they're the kind of vocals I don't like.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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29-05-2006 10:55 |
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Rudeone
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like the keys and the vocals. this is very nice.
but i prefer dnb with bigger drums. drums more up front. oh at 2:20 the drums get into some more rolling. drums more up front plz. bigger kick and snare. a sine bass layer over the sub would be great as well.
really like it! its worth the work imo
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01-06-2006 11:49 |
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marcthebeat
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Originally posted by rudeone
like the keys and the vocals. this is very nice.
but i prefer dnb with bigger drums. drums more up front. oh at 2:20 the drums get into some more rolling. drums more up front plz. bigger kick and snare. a sine bass layer over the sub would be great as well.
really like it! its worth the work imo |
Sweet - thanks for listening, rudeone.
Appreciate the comments.. I will be polishing. I'll keep you up to date of any developments.
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02-06-2006 12:52 |
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equipped
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This shits fresh,..drums arn't funky enough imo,..you could work that piano into a big fat regga part and drop some massive break's,..and then bring it all back to the summer vibes,.just an idea,..anyway,..this shits fresh and well produced,..enjoyed,..cheers.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 02-06-2006 18:54.
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02-06-2006 18:53 |
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Muad'Dib
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Wow, nice vibe at the begining. The snare is ok, maybe little weak but ok. Nice stereo image you have there, good production. The bass is good, warm and deep. Since you made the whole tune to sound like live played, why didn't you make the bass to sound like a real bass guitar then?
I'm just bitchin over nothing ... 
Anyway, the vocals are sweet, and the guitar hit on the snare is good too, gives overall raggae feeling.. I think this was your intention, though that man has no rasta accent too much...
Wow, nice build in the latter part, at 02:15. I like the rhytm. Maybe the hats are a bit too hissy, try adding another beneath them, maybe the same sample, which will be with lower pitch...
Overall, great production, you can sell this fo sure. Try. I have mild fancy for this type of tunes, but this one beats the clock. Nice.
9/10 for production
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7/10 as a subjective grade (by me) but don't see this
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