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cynik cynik is a male
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fucked this up lol. added a whole new heavy section, but I kinda lost what I was going for

ALIEN_v2

do you like it? what should I change? I need honest opinions

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21-05-2006 19:50 Homepage of cynik
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i dont like that much stereo panning goin on with the drums and fx. the mix is still heavy limited and hurts my ears. im sorry but this is as honest as i can get.

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21-05-2006 20:11 Homepage of Rudeone
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i dont like that much stereo panning goin on with the drums and fx. the mix is still heavy limited and hurts my ears. im sorry but this is as honest as i can get.


no limiting here! lol

maybe there is too much high end.

thanks for the quick response!

more? Tongue

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21-05-2006 20:16 Homepage of cynik
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will review this as soon as i get back,..got to go grab a bag of weed. Wink -->{edit}-->just downloaded review in the works.

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21-05-2006 21:04
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if its not limited then its clippin


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21-05-2006 21:23 Homepage of Rudeone
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quote:
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if its not limited then its clippin


it's purposedly distorted = soft cliping, it's not really clipping as in damaging your hardware.

any comments on structure?

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21-05-2006 22:13 Homepage of cynik
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oh yes rudeone but if you were to rip a tune off a "pro" cd it would probably look like that.

but it does sound like there is maybe too much soft clipping... Big Grin

now to the reveiw....

the first bit is well strange that beat is really edgey. like someone said bit too much panning for my taste.
not too keen on the 4/4 beat bit. some of the samples dip out too sudden....
the way it goes into the "construct" sample is a bit abrupt....
love the bit after that when the beat goes a bit more rolling....imagine goin nutts to that on the floor....
the breakdown is fucked up..... Big Grin
the drop after is quite good but i think you should get rid of the reverse cymbol before it. takes the impact away....
maybe in this absolutly nutts parts there sould be some more low mid gritty ness....
4.25 where did that come from....there is some weird distortion on that fucker but its good.....
tis is some good shit....plenty to keep interest.....

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22-05-2006 14:13 Homepage of D2o
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intro sound isn't such an assult on the ears anymore,..much better,..structure's full of surprises,..oh dam Shocked ,..1:55-->2:17 is absolutly insane man,..amazing cybml hit's n splash's,.fuckn best shit ever man,...this part should be heavier imo,..whole tune need's more meat with the eq imo,..but it does have a certian agressive character the way it is,..i have to say man,..this is for shure my fav track you ever made,..those dam cymbls are pure backbone,..show's your shit in full,..brilliance with that pitched one,..sound's so dam good,..id try n get a tad more low in the overall sound and clean it up a tiny bit,..just tiny tiny bit's of each so you keep the aggressive distorted high sound in full,...anyway just my opinion,..this track is a masterpiece in the making,..gonna be huuge. Drummer

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well cynik u left me quite speechless right here ; quite some originality u got goin on here ; cool track ; i'll update this post later on when i get to listen to it at home ; but goddamn i love it Big Grin

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23-05-2006 09:52 Homepage of baz
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Sounds like a clipped mess in the intro. Do you have a good DB meter? Z

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27-05-2006 16:22 Homepage of Nick ZZ
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yes.. well... read the above posts..

any comments on structure?

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29-05-2006 09:18 Homepage of cynik
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