turnstyles 
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Registration Date: 03-02-2006
Posts: 55
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1st listen:
everything sounds so far away... almost like you are using the Karaoki EQ setting 
neat drumbeat. i like the off step kicks before the 2nd snare. surya was very correct about the need for change ups though.
2nd listen:
this could be a solid ambiant track. some recommendations:
bring out the ambiant sounds, maybe even pitch them up a little.
add some drum beat edits (that kick rush gets predictible)
try to change the bassline so that it compliments the melody instead of mirroring it (easier said than done, i know...)
add more cymbals, maybe a ride, a crash or two here and there.
overall, i do not know if you are very new to DnB and just trying to get a feel for your own vibe, or if you were shooting for an atmospheric track - so i am reluctant to say "do this' or "do that."
the point of my feedback is to make what i am hearing now sound cooler.
i think you can do it 
peace
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...let there be drum
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