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02-05-2006 18:44 |
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Surya
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With such a title you could expect the track to have some door kind of noise for the hook 
Anyway, this track has serious sound issues. It sounds like it's croming my grandmothers radio (soundwise, that is
). VERY thin sound, NO punch.
I found the hook rather annoying acually, sorry.
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02-05-2006 21:42 |
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off!ce
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hehe, lucky i checked before playing out huh
any tips on giving it more kick or punch...?
the-'yeah, you're gonna have to start over' tip is allowed 
as for the title i know 
better make it untitled .period.
thanks for listening
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31/10 Excess vs off!ce @ musiccafé,Leuven
10/11 Off!ce 4 @waaiberg Leuven
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02-05-2006 22:00 |
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states promissing from start but it doesn't pick up. weird soundchoices. certainly the body sounds like a first tune, but the intro is surprisingly good. needs ruffer beats and I didn't like the hook either
but, you gotta start somewhere.
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03-05-2006 12:14 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by off!ce
any tips on giving it more kick or punch...?
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make the kick out of different samples on top of each other (layers), one low for the "thud" one mid and I usually distort a thin one on top, gives it the sizzle
for the snare it's not uncommon to individually compress it but be careful as you can squash it very easy. try layering - same tricks as with the kick
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03-05-2006 12:19 |
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yeah im really liking the intro sounds and the vocals...
the build before the drop is interesting... but then the drop is abit thin.
and the bass riff is abit tripped out lol... still pretty cool though, things just need to be polished up. the break is cool and has some nice energy. some of the sound effects are pretty sweet. sounding alright.
keep workin it
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03-05-2006 16:14 |
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off!ce
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so if i'm understanding this the right way u 're sayin:
keep the intro, lose the rest...
i think i'm not gonna ditch this after all, and put some new influences in it ...innit
and maybe work on my sense of humour while at it...a tit
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22/07 off!ce session @ rumba Leuven
08/09 off!ce session @rumba Leuven
29/09 Silence @ Silo,Leuven b2b I-witness
30/09 Mektiburn @ ??? 2day festival raggajungle set!!!!
31/10 Excess vs off!ce @ musiccafé,Leuven
10/11 Off!ce 4 @waaiberg Leuven
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03-05-2006 16:49 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by off!ce
oh and euhm...what u mean by 'hook'? do u mean the theme/vibe/idea? |
Yeah
Well, starting over wouldn't be bad, coz with each new tune you learn new stuff. So best thing is to make as many tunes as possible 
About the punch: you need A LOT of equalizing and level ajustment to clean thisone up!
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