TuffDread 
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'LowFlyingOsc' and post your comments here!!!
ok this track isnt goin any further yet, just let me knw which bits you like and which bits are shit. so i knw what ppl wanna hear!
bass was made with sytrus!! FRUITY MASSIVE AGAIN. lol
check it out
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03-04-2006 12:26 |
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i like this tune
i'll give u a detailed review later on 
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03-04-2006 16:29 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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first off mono the bass
not impressed by the intro. drums need more layering and eqing, to much highs in the hats opposed to that lo-fi snare. try to introduce a different sound to play the transitions instead of that bass. it gets tired pretty fast
pay attention to levels, theyre way off now. bass is too loud, beats are too soft.
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03-04-2006 17:44 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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the stereo bass isn't toally bad imo, it's just too much. Tune is still too naked, dress it up please. Drums sound too faint.
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04-04-2006 00:54 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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hmmmm like the melody, but sounds a little presety imo...
well not feelin the intro coz its like everything is being brought in at once, an i've never been keen on the amen break used as 2-step, but that jus my preference..
hmmm really not feelin this one, mainly coz the bass jus sounds too tame, not enough grime imo....
cant tell you what sounds best, probably the beatz n thats sayin sumfin!...
need to work on the atmos of the track i think...
sounds a bit boring after a short time...
good edits on the breakz, but tune jus aint goin anywhere
eq wize, beatz are too quiet..
thanks tho bruv...
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04-04-2006 03:45 |
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Uproot Dj
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Registration Date: 30-03-2006
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The bass is to wide, on a vinyl it would make the needle jump. Also the bass aint that bassy, its very mid and overpowering the riddim. Bring out the drums more. I dont like that ride, it needs more ring to it.
Introduce more of that nasty crash throughout the tune, dirty the tune up a bit. Maybe some all out amen breaks.
Its a phat tune, just needs heavying up mate.
oh yeah, bring in some more sub bass under the mid section.
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04-04-2006 18:44 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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bassline modulation is nice but repeats too often. drums need to be more up front. pretty empty and not much details. im sorry but this sounds like a one days work.
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05-04-2006 10:53 |
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TuffDread
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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This was about 4-5 hours work. 
I get lost in a tune that i've made tho, so many things going on its hard to keep track. So I normally get this far and then stop. definately see what you're saying tho, I'll try to comcentrate more on my tracks.
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06-04-2006 09:16 |
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deafo
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 28-02-2006
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yeah when i first heard i jumped out my seat and shouted "wolf!!!"
obviously any tips from me will probably prompt to you copy shy fx
seriously tho love that loud synth fing at 2:09
track is a little to repetetive, try and add a few dittys
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06-04-2006 15:06 |
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TuffDread
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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wolf ?
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09-04-2006 16:10 |
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PEAHEAD
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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09-04-2006 20:03 |
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Muad'Dib
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The begining synth is kinda weak, too much on high freqs and no power.
The rythm is also weak and kinda lo-fi. Also it is too quiet compared to that bass sound that is all around me. I like the effect, but it is way too loud.
The cymbal is too quiet, but that applies to the whole break. You have nice beat, though.
The melodies of the bass are empty and not very harmonic. Try altering the keys according to the major and minor scales.
For a full atmosphere you should include some other song than just bass and some kind of reece.
The tune is kinda empty this way. Not interesting enough to keep my attention. This would pass by in a mix, but not as a standalone.
Try and you will get there! 
3/10
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