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PEAHEAD
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i need some feed back on this tune im makin. ive listend to it so many times i duno if its good anymore, u kno wht i mean

jus a bit of feedback would be nice

thanx in advance

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EDIT: the link works now. Big Grin

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by PEAHEAD: 03-04-2006 14:40.

02-04-2006 22:28
cynik cynik is a male
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link not working

you can't type the dots in lol.. copy the url from the adress bar

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03-04-2006 00:33 Homepage of cynik
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FIXED THE LINK!!!!!!!
03-04-2006 15:55
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oi! stop yellling

now..
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Please be patient!
This download hasn't been cleared yet. Please check back tomorrow.

wtf?!

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03-04-2006 15:58 Homepage of cynik
Greyone Greyone is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by PEAHEAD
FIXED THE LINK!!!!!!!


ye , you allways seem to yell .
i checked yo track , not the link but the thing you send me.

intro: cool samples , fill the intro up , with more samples .
intro stab is cool but you could do a lot more with it.
drop: rave is here to fast , make your intro longer , introduce the rave n then drop it.
sounds cool , drums are cool too etc..but...
pump up the volume of the drums , pump up the tempo , eq , produce , variate , sample , ...

long time i heard something from you P3d
03-04-2006 16:29
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now i really do like those pads...
tom tom drum sounds a little odd, not enough reveb on it imo..
like the kick that follows

straighht into the bizniz i see

beatz are good, catchy little ghost hits in there make it flow..

how ever the bass seems like its come outta nowhere, would've liked to seen it introduced a bit better..

second breakdown comes in quick or is it the first breakdon

1:54, needs to have more punch on the beatz coz they sound too similar like the first set...
kinda nice melody, but the filter thing you got goin has bits where it cant be heard at the right time... aware of this??? or your intention???

not a bad tune

needs more in it imo...

thanks

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04-04-2006 03:55
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cool midrange but not enough imo. needs to be phater and more twisted. drums could need more rollin too. more mids. i like that style

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05-04-2006 10:57 Homepage of Rudeone
cynik cynik is a male
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starts off very moody, prommising

drops: weak drums which need more layers

cool sounding reecer but it's weak too. not too fond of the bubbly sub, it sounds very undeefined

well not much else to comment on. has potential, nice to hear you're on your way

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07-04-2006 18:08 Homepage of cynik
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