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Dig your style man,.load's of nasty break's,..can appeciate this right now,..been choppin break's all dam day,..cubase madness!,...all your sound's are dark,..not one happy sound,.good job,...your melodies do get a bit happy toward's the end though,..id keep everything dark,.for this track...but that's just me,..vocal sample is in need of some mashin imo,.sound's tight though,...that sound at 00:18 sound's same as the sound i used in exact same spot in "Big League Chew",..i know it ain't the same sound,..but that shit's spot on,..must be something to do with bein old,..joke's,..anyway this is some sick producing,..only thing i don't dig is industrial sound on the break's,..that's an imo thing though,..but thought id point it out,..right then,..phat rack man,..enjoyed,...cheers.
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Crankin this shit again,...crazy edit's all over,..the shit's tight,...seem's like there's a bit much goin on with the break's toward's the end,..get's reall buzy soundin,.. but everthing's workin,..so maybe pull back a bit with the layer's here n there,..just an idea,..That bass is pure chunk,..nice work man,.enjoyin this shit.
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alright been waiting for this since I heard the first clip
intro is cool, lovely noises. the beats enter - not really a drop. the drop which comes later slams in nicely. I must say I'm not a fan of such basslines, resembling full cycle type but the sounds are far off, which are cool btw, I'm a sucker for those factory metal clang sort
gotta go, more detail later
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31-03-2006 18:14 |
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thanks for the reveiws, big help as always, i see what you mean stu towards the end the skippy snare chops are just cluttering things, im thinking of a big change up during the breakdown which is coming next, and droping in a second time alot more intense, the insperation behind the intro was old sci fi films, when somthings going to explode, hence the linear synthetic vocal, but yes later on in the track im gonna bring some vocal chops in and fuck it up, im struggaling a little to move on with itto be honest, i sat for two hours last night to work and started to bring in some very dark and urgent keys in the break down which sounded great, but not for this track, theres to much of a dancefloor bounce vibe to bring in tech tinged darkness, i was playing with the idea of some regaee keys and some horns, or maybee just some bass change ups with a peircing lead and some fat reeses, f9'k knows, any ideas what vibe people get from this, or any comments to my own ideas would be a help, thanks
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01-04-2006 08:42 |
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its a sad and sorry day, im afraid i found a f/'cking virus on my computer today so ive had to reformat, ive had to lose the files for this track so im afraid it will never be finished, im pretty p..ssed off as i put a lot of passion and work into lockdown, but never mind, thats life, so im gonna be in the thick of things again for a while getting somthing else together.
thanks to all those that reveiwed this track and gave me encouragement, respect, anyway, heres to the war against the machines, big up god, you da energy booahhh, keep your eyes and ears open, ill be back
peace out
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er, sorry to break it to ya but you didn't need to delete your project files. viruses usually attack only .exe, .com and .dll files. you could have backuped them before formatting. why didn't you ask???
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04-04-2006 10:53 |
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doooohhhh, ha ha f/-ck it never mind, maybee its a good thing, fresh slate, an all that, its cool cheers cynik, yeah ill ask in future.
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04-04-2006 11:36 |
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this is nice n different...
i like the drums n percussion.. they are cool.
and the basslines are pretty hard.
sounding cool... i like the change ups an stuff.
keep workin it.
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07-04-2006 07:27 |
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i wish i could mate, but ive deleated the files, by mistake it looks like too, but, im working on a tech influenced thing that i feel is coming on strong, cheers for the posative reveiws,
take it easy people
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07-04-2006 08:35 |
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07-04-2006 17:38 |
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lol, cynik if you wanna go for it thats cool, as long as im credited in the colab, do a fat vip mate, no worries, let me know if you want any files, ive got a couple left, i can proberbly dig up, wicked, this could be good.
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07-04-2006 17:42 |
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lol, cynik if you wanna go for it thats cool, as long as im credited in the colab, do a fat vip mate, no worries, let me know if you want any files, ive got a couple left, i can proberbly dig up, wicked, this could be good.
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hehe but I would like to totally destroy that bassline
if that's cool. wouldn't call it a VIP but a jemone VS cynik
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07-04-2006 17:52 |
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yeah no problem mate, ill send you what i got, destroy my bassline...well.....oh go on then, hi hi yeah mate, f'/ck it up whatever, wicked look forward to it. ill e mail you the wavs i got left, cheers dude.
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07-04-2006 17:58 |
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07-04-2006 18:03 |
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no wories just zipped up some wavs, not all of them but hopefully somthing you can use, and they include that bassline, hi hi,
, ill send em now, keep me updated as you go if you want
laters mate
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07-04-2006 18:06 |
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Yeah this track is very slick mate
Constantly in flux which is probably a pretty good attribute
Probably wouldn't listen to this type of track before going tobed but i can imagine my self getting right into it with the the aid of the appropriate supplements.
I disagree with one comment where someone claimed it was too happy at times, i couldn't really imagine a darker song. Personally i would prefer some more melodic parts but it probably wouldn't really work that well with your style.
Maybe if any critcisms could be made, your snare in the first drumloop seem a shade tinny, maybe you could drop a slightly deeper snare with it also. Dunno really tho
Kia Kaha
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Too bad its lost, it sounded great loved all those industrial sounds and the bass and all that.
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25-04-2006 11:56 |
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have no fear, i have a new track im working on on the same sort of vibe, just taking a while to knock it up, keep em peeled for" godspeed "
cheers jem
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25-04-2006 12:15 |
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