Uproot Dj 
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Registration Date: 30-03-2006
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Ive been known to rip other peoples tracks apart, i find its the best way to get a drive, just to let you know im trying to help.
I like the intro. The mid sound is nice, but theres no low frequency, either boost the bass on the bassline, use a HP filter to bring it out or even write a separate sub bass track.
The Drums really need work, try layering snare to give a fuller sound, compressing kicks and snares always make them a lot more puncy which is what they need to be in this track. The beat could do with being dirtier, maybe some rides, muted crashes etc.
The structure is ok, but needs more consistancy, it has some real random parts in there.
Keep it Up!
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30-03-2006 08:46 |
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PEAHEAD
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Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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what happend to STINK BOMB, thts a much beta name
and by the way the bass is layerd i was there wen he made it. yeah drums do need more punch tht snare i stil sounds nice mabye lower the volume a touch, mabye try layering it with a nano snare with a fast attack. desecrated bass massive, break down is clean n crisp reali good atmosphere what the fuk u done to it, them drums come in to early id say. in the breakdown. i think it was beta yesterday without the drums wel i supose ur the 1 makin the tune tho.
hats are nice clean and not to muddedy up mabye add a touch more reverb on tht hat and add another closed hat in there. yeah pretty good for 4hours tho lol
wel tuff ill probley seeya 2nite neways so in a blitzed m8
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30-03-2006 09:22 |
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TuffDread
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Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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The drums in this track arent too good to be fair, couldnt find the right level for that damn snare either 
. But it's all good, cheers for the comments guys. The bass should be there, the problem I have with eqing is always the bass because I only have a pair of £7 headphones to do it with. No excuse really but i'll use it anyways, and the random bits you're talkin about are keys slipping in Absynth (does anybody else have this problem?) I think that's what you're reffering to 
Think my problem with the bass is compressor on master mixer channel and the kick taking up too much spectrum and still not being that punchy???? what the fuck am I doing, I dont know, not a clue 
what should I do to get those punchy kicks is the question. anybody care to answer it?
compress kicks and snares???? I wish I knew what a compressor even did... 
P-head I think I could prob do with a bit of echo rather than reeverb. Anybody have any good apps for this? and th beats do needs layering and completing, i'm a twat you know it I just want people to move to my new tunes. lol.
CHEERS REVIEWERS, goin for a 
college is shit.
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30-03-2006 13:37 |
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baz
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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first off as i said to everyone who's used the desecrated sampe pack lately
stop doin it or make it less recognisable 
aight so the intro is quite simple (coud be better if that bass was diffrent)
now let's stop whinin bout that bass
the bassline has got some cool edits drumz still could get more complex an harder but there's deff a progress since ur last tune;
2:30 this lounge like buidup works better than what u did in the intro
mybe make an intro like that ??
also try addin some more ambience to the whole thing may work out as a benefit
cheerz
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31-03-2006 11:29 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Yo TuffDread!
intro: hihat isnt very interesting...too normal....distort it n stuff...more cymbals...breaks...
like how the bass arrives, nice filtering.
drop: kicks has no real power, whole drumloop is not very full, layer them with a splitted drumloop or stuff, some ghostnotes.....
i like the bassline, but too less variation overall, just this one bass....
2nd drop: shot is pretty cool, uhh...some ghostnotes
......but overall the same again.
ok, like the bassline but dislike the drums, work on them.
track needs more changeups!
cheers
camo
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01-04-2006 13:44 |
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jemone
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Registration Date: 01-02-2006
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easy dread, definately an improvement on your last tunes,bass line nice and fat, the hats in the intro are out of time, the overall drums need some work more layers more edits, try variation on the snares, ghost snares needed, percussion, distortion compression.
a lead line might be nice, or some more change ups, cut in different breaks for a bar, you know what i mean. try and find a moody vocal, make one yourself, if youve got a mike and a nice distortion, reverb.
whats with the end, where did the track go ?
anyway keep at it
jem.
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