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Wãn Bushi
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drum beat is cool, specialy for a third attempt. It's a very chill track, but I kept on waiting for something with a big fat bass line to come up, but it never did. The strings are nice, sure. But I m missing something with more rythmics (like the drums), cause now everything are long slow notes. Dont' need to make the song harder, keep this vibe, but make it more boogie woogie ..... if you see what i mean (not easy to comment songs in english tbh ^^).
Nb : think i heard your bass line : it's a very synth bass sound. Try to put some sub bass in stead with some more notes.
keep it up
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22-03-2006 15:37 |
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mj99968548
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yeh i figured i need more variation in the beats and add a ore meatier bline, dam bline is had, lol back to the drawing board.
Got to say making music is addictive, not enough hours in the day.
regards MJ
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22-03-2006 17:04 |
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jemone 
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yeah nice crisp sound, maybee could do with a little warmth though, just to fatten it up, definately a stronger bassline, to fill some bottom end.
the track is very laid back, maybee you meant it to be this way, if you want it to be a little more urgent, up the tempo a little, or and add some shakers skippy mids etc.
reminds me of an aphex twin sort of vibe, or an ambient sort of sound.
nice try for your third attempt, its not easy, i should know im on a big learning curve myself, but it shows in your sound that your thinking about what your doing and trying out your ideas.
good job keep it up dude 
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22-03-2006 17:18 |
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mj99968548
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thanks for the advice jemone
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22-03-2006 18:59 |
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BattleDrone
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Aphex Twin was the name that came up immediately. Very nice atmosphere, like you said yourself, the drums need more variation. Also a dominant bass sound would add up to the overall atmosphere of the song.
The strings are great, the bleeping effect (song starts with it) is not really my stuff and I think you could definately find some sound that fits the atmosphere better or maybe you should put some other FX onto it.
Looking forward to your Fourth 
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