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Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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19-03-2006 12:53 |
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Rudeone
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wicked drums. those pads and sounds could need more work though i think. a bit too simple like that imo. missing some action. not much goin on beside those drums. that vocal sample doenst fit at all imo.
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19-03-2006 22:35 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The intro is a bit too friendly IMO, I don't feel any fear from it. The second synth is even more friendly. Also the melodies you play are rather cheerfull.
This is in heavy contrast with the break and vocals which seem quite agressive.
I would chose a different synth (or tweak it 'till it's nasty).
The break is nicely done, the bass should dominate some more, more variation should be added, f.e. a different break or 2.
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19-03-2006 23:43 |
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equipped
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Nice work Glim!,..nice rollin liquid,..pad's could use a layer or two, sprinkled here n there,.. of something simular,..will give pad's more movement,.. like the odd delayed filter sweep over top of what you allready have,. or something like that,..anyway im not makin much sense,..the ideas and chord's used sound deep just a tad presety at the moment imo,..small detail but huge part of the track...Bass sound's awsome man,..like a brickwall,..solid edit's y'all slapped on it,..the shit be groovin!,..Drum's are nice n full soundin,..roll perfectly and are full of treat's,..diggin all the stop's,..Synth at->4:16 doesn't blend with the trak,..allmost sounded like it was fighting for space 
,..everything els went really quite when it started....Anyway for a night's work,. is some solid poo Glim!,..Track's a treat....Cheers.
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20-03-2006 06:23 |
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Glim
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cheeres equipped, i edited it so that its the newer version now, re equd the whole thing
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20-03-2006 14:05 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
sorry glim but the intro is very cheesy.....more songs of praise than dnb.....
it could be nice if you just change some of the notes. |
New version kick's ass,..had it in my head all dam day,..same note's,..and i dig em!,..deep shit Glim.
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23-03-2006 07:05 |
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equipped
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only part i don't dig is where you change em up a bit toward's the end,..i can totally see gettin turned of by this version, so no offence Jimmy C's,..It comes off as cheese for shure,..but them notes are beut imo,..just need's some grit,....cheers.
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23-03-2006 07:08 |
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equipped
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Originally posted by equipped
Nice work Glim!,..nice rollin liquid,..pad's could use a layer or two, sprinkled here n there,.. of something simular,..will give pad's more movement,.. like the odd delayed filter sweep over top of what you allready have,. or something like that,..anyway im not makin much sense,..the ideas and chord's used sound deep just a tad presety at the moment imo,..small detail but huge part of the track...Bass sound's awsome man,..like a brickwall,..solid edit's y'all slapped on it,..the shit be groovin!,..Drum's are nice n full soundin,..roll perfectly and are full of treat's,..diggin all the stop's,..Synth at->4:16 doesn't blend with the trak,..allmost sounded like it was fighting for space
,..everything els went really quite when it started....Anyway for a night's work,. is some solid poo Glim!,..Track's a treat....Cheers. |
hey there you go,..forgot i posted on this lol.
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23-03-2006 07:11 |
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darn, i love your sound, really wicked, nice things , many ideaas, sound is nicely clean, nice subs, got any remark on it,
keep it up mate and you will get somewhere
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