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nice atmo all around
tuune has deff improved since the last time 
nice tune but once again not really my territory so i won't be sayin much 
production wise it sound allright ; altough the eq could be done lot's better
(i'm really experiencin' difficulties tryin to find a kick with punch to it
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nice progress
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16-03-2006 23:16 |
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cynik
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a LOT better than the first version, and I can hear where you wanna go with this. yeah, much more raw than the last
some of the drum samples could be cut up better. mind you I'm listening on desktop speakers at work. did you up the tempo?
more detail later
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17-03-2006 09:56 |
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jemone
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thanks for the reveiws, no i didnt up the tempo any, just added some harder snares, and changed the hi hat pattern, added some extra bass stabs, and chopped into the beats some more, i think this has given the impression of a bit more pace, yeah eq is an area im not to sure of, i try my best, but this only my second tune ive pretty much finished so im sure given time ill get my head around it.
ive not done much in terms of producing, so things are gonna be a bit ruff at the moment, ive got lots of ideas but making my ideas solid and living aint always easy as im sure you can associate with.
but saying all that, i feel i progress one step at a time and im sure ill make mistakes along the way, but im also learning all the time which is cool, thanks to everyone for their input and help
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17-03-2006 20:55 |
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cynik
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one more take at this
yeah, compared to this, the first version sounds like you were just having fun with a laptop and some crappy in-ear headphones
drums sound much more defined with a very strong character. you messed up the levels a bit here, the airplane pad is simply too loud and overwhelming everything else, note how the drums go down in volume when it goes
love the new distorted stab sounds. that pad is really bothering the entire mix, a part without it to properly hear the other sounds would be great.
feels theres still a coulpe of things to do yet. still likin' the vibe
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18-03-2006 15:13 |
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jemone
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yeah i know what ya mean about that pad, it overwhelms everything, tell you what, ill drop it right back in the mix, ill tidy a few things up and ill drop it to your mail cynik, my minds already a thinking on my next track, so i feel i need to move on from pheonix, but ill certainly take on board what youve said, use it and finish up. i monitor everything on headphones(not quite in ear ones lol) a pair of technics, but headphones all the same, so i find it can be difficult getting levels and getting the right stereo spread, plus i make it up as i go along lol
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18-03-2006 21:14 |
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cynik
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headphones are fine, but you gotta alternate with a pair of speakers too, no matter how crap they are. I wouldn't worry about the stereo spread, it's the kind of stuff you can do later IMO, when the mixdowns complete
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18-03-2006 21:18 |
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Glim
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Wicked start, like stepping into another world
yeah this is soundin good man...
quite a dark tribal feel
great drum hit in there somewhere
excellent edits on the breaks
would increase the volume of the bass notes with doublng it up at places or sumfin
Pads that follow make for a more chilled vibe, but eq those beatz better and this could be much more harder
wicked choon
thanks
Glim
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19-03-2006 12:43 |
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Wãn Bushi
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well difficult song to comment tbh. Sounds very pro, so nothing to say about that. Musicaly, it's a a very discontinuing beat thourh all the song, wich I personaly dont like cause I have like the feeling it's a big big intro that never stops. And the flanger gets me annoyed a bit. But it are minors details, cause surely the sound is good, and people will shake on it, so still nice work.
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22-03-2006 15:27 |
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equipped
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Nice work on the intro,..wicked sound's,..solid edit's on the drum's,..Bass is really tight,..Sick revers->2:10,..comes together well at->2:33,..lovin this sutle buildup,..well done man,..all the element's come in perfectly,...A vocal or two would spice this up,..slammin->4:00,...sound's tight,..track's pro soundin indeed,..huuuge-->4:43,..massive edit's on drum's goin down,..track's fully loaded,..Cheers.
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23-03-2006 00:27 |
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Uproot Dj
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Nice overall sound. Love the flow when it drops, nice stepping beat. Think you ve dragged the pad in the middle of the tune for too long, it needs a bit of variation. Good filter work and like the phaser when it drops the second time, but i would rather it redrop without the phased pad.
Nice tune.
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