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I like the laid back groove of this one. The bass could use a boost and the hihats sound way too "nice" for me. The tune also still misses an overall identity and you should add some more flow (a second bass maybe?).
Also a little bit of variation in the drumline would be cool (I'm not really into those totally shopped p tunes either)
You sure are going in a nice direction, can't wait for the final version.
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14-03-2006 19:06 |
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cynik
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some really nice sounds in the intro, like that synth overlapping the bass but you drop it out too soon
drops: beats don't punch enough, then again the whole tunes got a laidback feel. sequencing is pretty spot on, human sounding drums, the ghost snares could get a slight quantize treatment
I like the vibe when it drops though, oldskool but not forced out
some weird sound choices escpecially that highat which you use as a crash, I'm thinking a real crash would fit there way better.
I'd loose that filtering or flanging you got going on on the drums giving the whole track a wishy washy feel, IMO the drums are a backbone of a dnb tune.
basses are punchy, but try playing with the attack/decay in order to make em a bit bouncier, the sequencing left a robotic feel
the atmospherics and little fx add to the overall rich feel the tune has. do work more on this, the ideas behind are top
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14-03-2006 21:16 |
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jemone
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cheers people, makes sense what you say, here we go with the old school laid back vibe again, aarrrggghh i wanna crush bonesw, i wanna slay with my killa beatz and bass 
lol 
, ive gotta get nasty man, grrr im mean and nasty, grr grrr
, but seriously nice one for your input, its a really big help for me right now while i find my feet .peace
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15-03-2006 09:36 |
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cynik
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15-03-2006 11:47 |
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Nice chill vibe, minimalistic mix. I like it 
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16-03-2006 10:39 |
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nice ez flow here
not really my style tough but it sounds allright
as i said it ain't my style so i can't really say much about it or it would turn out breakcore again
keep @ it
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16-03-2006 10:58 |
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baz
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Originally posted by cynik
crush bones? lol then ditch the dreamy pads, distort the shit out of everything, up the bpm and then yore in crushin bones territory |
that's a fact
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16-03-2006 10:59 |
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TuffDread
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Not very nasty, need some of that nasty bass...
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22-03-2006 21:17 |
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jemone
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Originally posted by TuffDread
Not very nasty, need some of that nasty bass...
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well yeah mate i agree, but the full version is below, with "some nasty bass" 
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