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visn

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Yo, if you have some spare time, just check this one out, gimme some comments or advice
just go to http://www.myspace.com/vissn
(you can download it there)
greetz and thx for your time

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by visn: 11-03-2006 14:42.

11-03-2006 14:39

visn

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please so some advice ? Confused

19-03-2006 15:42

Rudeone
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sry myspace down atm

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19-03-2006 22:38

djfreemc djfreemc is a male

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Nice atmosphere. I think it can be improved though. Mostly by making it smoother. It's a liquid melodic track, so make it smooth. Try using slides or velocity automation on the melodies and basslines. The "stutter" like effect on the melodies bothers me a bit too. I think you were trying to add a more speedy feel to the track that way. I think they should at least be more faded, or you could leave the stutter out and add a second, faster, quiter melody to speed it up. Also the track might need some more elements, added gradually throughout the track. Now I feel I have heard about everything that's in it by the time it's halfway. The mixing and stuff sounds OK good to me.
Overall I think the track has a good vibe and atmosphere, but it needs some smoothing up.

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19-03-2006 23:03

Rudeone
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not feelin your drummin. try to get more rollin. you have good ideas but the arrangement doesnt come that good imo.

tune gets too weird in the end.

ez

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19-03-2006 23:15

visn

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gonna work on that, when i have some spare time
I changed the order of instruments a bit compared to my first version, it's more lenght out, but as if for the beat, i'm really gonna take the time to see how i can get the beat more rolling without taking in on the quality (it is still al made with FL 3). will place the new version in the same topic. Thx for the comments

03-04-2006 15:46

Glim

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great punchy kicks, very welcomed bruv..

hmm strange kinda overused snare hits goin on...
like the rhodes but who wouldnt...

not feelin the use of them at parts..

i dunno if its a style thing but i dont like tunes where everything is goin off on one, if it werent for the lead and the rhodes then i jus wouldnt be feelin this at all

would like to hear a more tamed 2 step kinda tune from you on this tip...

dude cant stand those repetative snares on that break jus sounds weak and lazy

sorry but im alwayz honest...

structure is my amin issure here

keep workin on it tho mate

thanks..

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04-04-2006 03:58

visn

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Originally posted by Glim
hmm strange kinda overused snare hits goin on...

would like to hear a more tamed 2 step kinda tune from you on this tip...

dude cant stand those repetative snares on that break jus sounds weak and lazy

it's indeed weak and lazy made this tune in one day. But i'm trying to figure it out how to make the beat more rolling (maybe by using hihats more correctly) so i can get ridd of the overused snares
I really want to do this one in 2ndstep (gonna try it out)
thx for the comment

06-04-2006 14:01

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