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i like the little trancy style of your track,
the intro is a little too long i think,
try to remove the lead sounds in the middle of the track
and improve the bass in this part more.
try putting the volume of the bassline higher.
try distorting the drums a little. but dont distort the base drum
i think the basedrum is ok!
all in all a nice track i enjoyed the listen!
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26-02-2006 17:23 |
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deafo 
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yeeeahh i like these trancy sounds coming into drumnbass, its cooool. especially after i was disappointed by breakgaes new record, it had the sounds but overall it didnt cut the mark for me.
have you heard the contrast(high contrast)'s new record, Days gone by. It's got the same kinda vibe as this one. check that out for tips.
i like the flow of the drums but i reckon they sound a bit distant. try to make them sounding fuller by compressing then distorting and mixing with an unaffected copy of themselves.
also to make it a bit more dancer friendly try adding an element that plays on every beat like another bass \ synth. i dont know if you wreckon so but this is actually sounding quite dancey to me at the min.
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14-03-2006 12:43 |
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Rudeone
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have you heard the contrast(high contrast)'s new record, Days gone by.
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yes, and i love it. just like cyantifics, cover story.
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i like the flow of the drums but i reckon they sound a bit distant. try to make them sounding fuller by compressing then distorting and mixing with an unaffected copy of themselves.
also to make it a bit more dancer friendly try adding an element that plays on every beat like another bass \ synth. i dont know if you wreckon so but this is actually sounding quite dancey to me at the min. |
im glad you like it. ill try what you recommend about the drums as the tune isnt finished anyways. thx 4 comment
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15-03-2006 09:24 |
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18-03-2006 18:07 |
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hehe not my sorta stuff to listen to, but i dont mind listening to it.
this actually pretty good, and my girlfriend likes it... and she hates my stuff lol... but yeah im liking this one.
nice atmosphere and sounds. the drums sound fairly good to me.
the piano is pretty cool... i reckon it would be cool if the bass drop was abit more in ur face... bass needs to roll along on the drop or something. but then it drops the full bass and its sounding nice now...
all the sounds fit nicely together. good work.
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19-03-2006 02:55 |
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very nice flow of the beats. you could have chosen highats better but very nice programming
stop at 1:10 felt too abrupt, drop an element at a time and maybe add some delay.
I like whats coming next - the riff is quality. it could do with fewer notes though. not liking the way two drops are the same. the breakdown in between could be done with a different drum kit. totally digging the Noisia sounding mid-bass. is it a sample? it could use a sub underneath to make it mean
doesnt progress much further from the intro though, could be because you keep them strings all the time.
nice stuff but needs better attention to the structure, sounds etc.
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29-03-2006 00:11 |
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Drum's are nice n sticky,..can totally hold there own....well done,..intro sound's allot heavier than previous,..fuck this is a shit load better,..Everything sound's tight,..would agrree that takin the melody/sting thing so many bar's get's a bit tired,..and clashes a bit when things start gettin heavy imo,..but shit, this is shapin up to be a a fuckin deep tune,..cheers,..look foward to finished tune.
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29-03-2006 04:46 |
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Rudeone
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a chilled out mix. hmm what the hell happened to that bass sweeper?? it was driving the tune IMO. and you softened the bassline too.
not feeling anything youve done to this man, sorry. it's still a nice tune without it's original groove though
how about a dancefloor-smasher remix now? 
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31-07-2006 14:55 |
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Rudeone
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hm dunno need to make another mixdown on my monitors. have to reequalize the bass
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you could do it 
cheers for comment
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31-07-2006 15:03 |
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Rudeone
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thx for your detailed review jimmy. this helps a lot and i agree with you in nearly every point. will post an update soon
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