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Nick ZZ 
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21-02-2006 16:44 |
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turnstyles
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ifrst listen:
i like the intro. good sounds. the vox and ambiance flow well together. the metallic ting to the drums is a nice touch. the quick change up at 2:23 is sweet. very industrial vibe going on here. just past the 3 minute mark. the synth is starting to wear on me. just a touch more fx on them, or any form of variation could help. may be just me though. hell, i made it this far 
there we go, for the outro you have more variations to the synths. 5 minute mark is tight. i like the stripped down groove. i actually think the drums were turned down for the second half of the song. i will listen closer on the next run through. haha that sounds like a creaky door during the ambiance close out. nice touch.
second take:
nice flow to the track. very industrial/idb groove. the intro could be a little long in some views, but not in mine. now wait a second... where is the bass? i didnt even notice on the first run through. the synth has some bass behind it, but it is not very pronounced. thats all good in the end though, as it goes with the industrial feel. i still think a little variation on the synth could help, even something so simple as playing with the last half of it (it starts with a kick, then fades out over a 3-5 second period. this fading bit of the synth is what i am referring to in terms of adding fx.) the second breakdown is cool. nice percussion work.
overall:
i like it. its different. its a neat track and an enjoyable listen. keep em coming, and hope this helps.
peace.
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22-02-2006 04:39 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by turnstyles
ifrst listen:
i like the intro. good sounds. the vox and ambiance flow well together. the metallic ting to the drums is a nice touch. the quick change up at 2:23 is sweet. very industrial vibe going on here. just past the 3 minute mark. the synth is starting to wear on me. just a touch more fx on them, or any form of variation could help. may be just me though. hell, i made it this far
there we go, for the outro you have more variations to the synths. 5 minute mark is tight. i like the stripped down groove. i actually think the drums were turned down for the second half of the song. i will listen closer on the next run through. haha that sounds like a creaky door during the ambiance close out. nice touch.
second take:
nice flow to the track. very industrial/idb groove. the intro could be a little long in some views, but not in mine. now wait a second... where is the bass? i didnt even notice on the first run through. the synth has some bass behind it, but it is not very pronounced. thats all good in the end though, as it goes with the industrial feel. i still think a little variation on the synth could help, even something so simple as playing with the last half of it (it starts with a kick, then fades out over a 3-5 second period. this fading bit of the synth is what i am referring to in terms of adding fx.) the second breakdown is cool. nice percussion work.
overall:
i like it. its different. its a neat track and an enjoyable listen. keep em coming, and hope this helps.
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Thanks for the listen, you are right I need at least two more synth edits to make this track a little better. I will get right on that. I know there is not really a bass line, I don't ever use them, I just use the synth and bass drumz and count on percussion to keep it moving. Thanks for the review, it is much appreciated! Z
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22-02-2006 07:37 |
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Aron
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try to pull the snare louder,
nice ambient noises,
make the lead synth fatter.
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23-02-2006 16:35 |
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Hypoxic
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this is cool, love the intro ambience,
sweet vocal samples.
I would def put in a nice driving bass.
percussion at 4min is sic, and laugh sample inbackground
goes sic.
main snare req beef. and maybe a spare rib.
or a diff snare sample.
really like the evil ambience, so dark, reminds me of something
out of aliens or something like that.
that distorted synth is a bit loud i think.
some nice edits init too. you could use one more driving hihat too.
nice work, i like it.
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www.myspace.com/hypoxicmusic
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