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mj99968548
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Hi folks
I've just created a new track, it is my first ever track after a couple of months dabbling with battery. cubase and absynth.

you can download from here,

http://www.myspace.com/cyborgevolution

Any feedback is much apreciated. It is a short track, and very basic.

Regards
MJ

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19-02-2006 17:30
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ftp Huh Huh Huh ??? nice way of sharing fast m8 :bigupFrown oh yea review follows i guess )

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19-02-2006 17:49 Homepage of baz
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man, it's sure gonna be nice when the upload feature is re-enabled Frown

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19-02-2006 18:05
mj99968548
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ftp is well slow, sorry folks, i'll have to think of an alternative but i will keep the ftp running in the mean time
19-02-2006 18:08
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Sorted it out, you can download from here,



http://www.myspace.com/cyborgevolution
19-02-2006 18:45
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very good for a beginning producer
go on i'd say.
19-02-2006 19:20
mj99968548
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thanks greyone
19-02-2006 19:24
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aight here's the review
first of all i must say that ur mp3 is rather silent;no?
ain't got much to say for this ent really my style but keep @ it dude an don't forget to push up that volume Bigup

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19-02-2006 21:39 Homepage of baz
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Drums are quite decent, didn't care much for the rest. Too symphonic for my taste, and I kinda missend a strong bassline!

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19-02-2006 21:58 Homepage of Surya
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good start for your first track,

my opinion is that these long lead sounds giving the track a slow flow,

and put a bassline on it.
24-02-2006 15:50
mj99968548
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Thank for all the feedback folks, i will take it on board and post my second track,

back to th drawing board and figure out bassliness,

Peace
MJ
24-02-2006 19:14
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