BigFire 
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Mass transit' and post your comments here!!!
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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06-02-2006 23:43 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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oh, beautiful.
adjust the vocal, pitch it up so that it fits better. you'll know when to stop.
synth is nice and warm, atmospheric. piano and guitar are both nice, as well as the mellow lil hit.
if you're gonna have a growly bassline at all, don't make it so lowpassed...bring that bitch up! thats the only part of the tune that sounds completely ridiculous in its current state.
this would get pretty boring after a while tho.
expand on your melodies! give them all bigger, more complex parts that people will still want to dance to. i wanna hear a lil high note jam accompanying the lows on the piano line, assuming you made that piano.
fairly good preview.
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07-02-2006 02:45 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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liking the synth work and riffs... they fit nicely.
i just think the drums in the intro were abit poxy sounding.
and yeah with the bass give it some more mid range.
drums are sounding better with bass
nice trancy dnb, could probably do some more percussion to get it driving along...
the drum snare change up was too noticable in volume... the other snare was abit soft, then this hard one comes in, and its abit of a surprise. maybe turn it down abit.
sounding good. 
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07-02-2006 04:21 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The ambient pad you hear at the beginning (te very first sound you play) is going on a bit too long into the song imo.
The second snaredrum you use (in the middle part) is much better then the other one, but as somebody already mentioned there's a big difference in volume.
Nice-to-haves:
- The piano sounds too flat and repetitive, it somewhat spoils the song I think. Maybe a different piano sound, a (tiny) little more variation would help out.
- Also a little more variation in the drums would come in nicely
- Maybe a little FX here and there (intro, break part) would spice things up a bit more.
- The end appears quite unexpected.
The subbass is extremely cool. Overall atmosphere is an absolute killertrack.
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07-02-2006 13:57 |
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Dj Kemix
Global Audio Recordings
Registration Date: 12-08-2005
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Thanks For An Adventure Through The Amazon....
This Is Beautiful Work...
Well Done.
~Kemix
wood-flutes are sickie!
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http://www.myspace.com/kemikalmedia
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08-02-2006 00:17 |
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Fluctuation
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Registration Date: 08-02-2006
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not sure about snare/ stick on intro.. like the ambient build up.. then snare rolls in nicely.. like the piano/rhodes at 1min 15secs.. drops nicely.. subtle bass. nice n subby 
personally id like a beefier bass. but I like this as a chilled / progressive DnB tune
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08-02-2006 01:36 |
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exhumed
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Registration Date: 08-02-2006
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this song is BRIGHt.
for some reason that felt like the appropriate word.
that damn noise in the begining is pretty annoying though.
it sounds off beat and it just doesnt sound like it belongs there.maybe turn it down or something. other then that, i must say i really enjoyed. very different then what i have been recently listening to. very refreshing,uplifting. mad props brotha.
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08-02-2006 11:13 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Yo BigFire!
intro: not sure about synth....0.21: nice melody comes in: like it. works well together.
drop: i like it: it works really very well together. bit calibre style i think. 2:15:hmmm: bit cheesy, just a bit
snare could be bit louda bit its rollin good!
2:57: not sure bout the switch to the new drumLOOP. like the other more.3:52: same again. the structure is not very good. stops too emediatly!!!
ok: overall a nice tune! there has to be a betta structure. work on that!!
8/10
respect
peace
camo
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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10-02-2006 21:32 |
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ThusSpoke
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Registration Date: 02-10-2007
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Whoa! Starts off with a great... beat? I loved it from start. Though I get the idea I heard all of it already @ 3:30. I would have wanted to hear more different tunes, but maybe that's not what you had in mind at all. Mellow yet very present AND musical bassline. Love the nonchalant piano chords, it felt different before and after the onset of the beat & bass. I like the mellow feeling of the tune, overall.
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07-10-2007 13:11 |
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Nick ZZ
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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