Surora23 
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Please check out my new track 'Entah' and post your comments here!!!
Well now.. again thsi is just a clip.. pretty rough sketch... basic idea lay out kinda thing goin on here...
But for this one i was going for something a bit more organic... a bit more ethnic lets say... not soo "spacy" as i usually do...
All the breaks were programed using cartridge one shots that i highly recomend to those who want proper break sounds...
2 apache kits
along with 3 other break kits...
I wanted that epic RH/Metalheadz vibe.. but at the same time, something that would obviously come from me... check it out...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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30-01-2006 21:55 |
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zebediah
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Very nice! I'm instantly feelin' this intro ... the synth has a nice electro-ish sound to it and the echoed ride cymbal is cool. I'm a sucker for that noise that comes in @ about 9 seconds. LOL What the hell is that and where do I get one? Nice atmosphere!
Ooh the drum work is nice! I love a good crash cymbal.
Not feelin the toms and shaker in the breakdown but I love how they build up with the synth. BOH!
Drop is excellent, Bassline is sexy, Melodies are devious ... all the makings for pure dancefloor destruction!
Something sounds distorted when the bassline drops but other than that 10/10! Finish her up!
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31-01-2006 00:27 |
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Surora23
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31-01-2006 00:38 |
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Glim
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mate luvin dis one straight up
as with the tune u showed me on msn, your use of the apache kit is superb,
metalheadz vibe bigtime here especially on the drop, those breakz sounds phat an real crisp too.
cool vocal
shit, cant explain how those breakz sound so punchy an crisp, never get muddy
excellent,
wish u'd make more tunes in this style
shit that second breakdown is massive
fuckin reece gives the track a voice brings the tune alive , great filtering sounds pro
thanks mate
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01-02-2006 09:19 |
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Surora23
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cheers mang 
keep em comin...
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02-02-2006 00:20 |
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cynik
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intro is nice but nothing special
but boy...
taht melody you played staring at 00:45, don't think i've heard anything on this site so soft and nice while at the same time melancholic. well done!
breaks are nice and punching as per usual from you.
vocals complement nicely but tend to overdo a little bit
feeling the reece afterwards, put in a spot on place just when track needed it. bassline could have been a more driving one but nice nevertheless
mixdown could be somewhat better, eg. those vocals left a bland feel to them
othrwise you should deffinitely finish this tune. if just 'cos of that insanely addictive melody with them synths
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02-02-2006 00:59 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by cynik
intro is nice but nothing special
but boy...
taht melody you played staring at 00:45, don't think i've heard anything on this site so soft and nice while at the same time melancholic. well done!
breaks are nice and punching as per usual from you.
vocals complement nicely but tend to overdo a little bit
feeling the reece afterwards, put in a spot on place just when track needed it. bassline could have been a more driving one but nice nevertheless
mixdown could be somewhat better, eg. those vocals left a bland feel to them
othrwise you should deffinitely finish this tune. if just 'cos of that insanely addictive melody with them synths |
yea deff...the vox been pissing me off...its been hard to resample them because theyve already been processed a bit... fucking samples lol...
and deff needs a bit of a mix...its comin along quite nicely... the second break is deff something id do, so most will know what to expect.. but we'll see
cheers...
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02-02-2006 01:24 |
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Glim
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Surora23
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lol dont be sorry.. the more words the better...
cheers again
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02-02-2006 17:57 |
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lose the rave sound.
apart from that, execution is good, maybe add a little more treble
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03-02-2006 20:22 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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No doubt the best track I've heard from you so far. Imo your weakness earlier has been poor melodies, but that's not the case here. Track's got a definite mood to it. Gotta agree with zebediah on the toms and shakers though, doesn't belong in this track. Otherwise loving the drums in this.
Nice, finish it.
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04-02-2006 02:02 |
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equipped
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Bass at--->{2:14} is absolute chunk man,..heard this a few day's ago,..been meanin to post on this shit,..shit's fucking huuge man,.. 
,......4:04->lfo insanity,...guessin on that one,..this shit's way fuckin beyond me man,..a fuckin job well done Surora 23.///track's just raised the bar on this mighty site,...cheers.... 
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04-02-2006 05:44 |
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Surora23
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wow...cheers... didnt think you guys would really dig this one lol..but thanks...
my 5 song EP is almost done...(i might as well just make it 6 and call it a LP)
you guys will only get a finished version of this song (entah) the rest on the EP will be exclusive and can only be heard via aim/msn...
so those interested...hit me up...
but again thanks...
keep em coming...
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05-02-2006 19:20 |
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anf0 D
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intro pad isnt the coolest but it does the job.
the hats cymbals in the intro sound nice. beats are phat 
really liking them. hopefully they progress phatter. the juno hoover sfx is cool 
i like the busy ghost snare action. the other background synth with more of a mellowdy on it is awesome. sits in the right spot i reckon... slightly in the back, but not too far.
extra percussion is pretty sweet. cool toms. nice effects before the drop. and the vox before the drop... spot on. drop is phat...
really liking the riff on the twisted reece. drums n percs flowwin nicely.
some serious phatness here.
i dont know... i reckon you could make the introduction abit more EPIC, because this tune is pretty epic... just needs that massive epic intro, with like reverb'd hits and shit... and just crazyness. but the intro still does the job
arrangment and production are pretty spot on... when are you gonna start releasing shit?
sounding good man, finish this beast
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05-02-2006 23:27 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by anf0 D
intro pad isnt the coolest but it does the job.
the hats cymbals in the intro sound nice. beats are phat
really liking them. hopefully they progress phatter. the juno hoover sfx is cool
i like the busy ghost snare action. the other background synth with more of a mellowdy on it is awesome. sits in the right spot i reckon... slightly in the back, but not too far.
extra percussion is pretty sweet. cool toms. nice effects before the drop. and the vox before the drop... spot on. drop is phat...
really liking the riff on the twisted reece. drums n percs flowwin nicely.
some serious phatness here.
i dont know... i reckon you could make the introduction abit more EPIC, because this tune is pretty epic... just needs that massive epic intro, with like reverb'd hits and shit... and just crazyness. but the intro still does the job
arrangment and production are pretty spot on... when are you gonna start releasing shit?
sounding good man, finish this beast
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im not releasing anything yet.. im making the EP to show consistancy on a demo...in turn showing i can do it again and again (if i were signed)
cheers for the comments mang...
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06-02-2006 22:29 |
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anf0 D
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yeah thats it aye...
being consistant... then u always get ppl wanting shit and asking for u to do remixs.
keep it up
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07-02-2006 00:04 |
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Greyone
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very nice shit .
structure's fine , quality sound here , nice drums.
just the sub that has some distortion on it.
and the drums should contain more high end action imo
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