drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » jfuzion - NuComer - (FINAL EDIT) jfuzion - NuComer - (FINAL EDIT) Author Post TuffDread Mr. Tuff Registration Date: 26-04-2005 Posts: 216 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'NuComer - (FINAL EDIT)' and post your comments here!!! Here is the finished version. Still got a lot to learn about EQ'ing but it's sounding like a banger! __ 25-01-2006 19:05 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  the melody in the intro sounds overplayed. but I like to go easy at first, minimal melody-wise.. beats drop in, no power. they should stomp properly, as with all amen tracks, which are in a way based around the amen. some of the chop-up work felt undone and off-beat, not ina good way vocal bits get overused. might be the fact they play a loop all over. synchronising them to the beats and/or adding variations with em would turn this way more interesting IMO I like the sound of the bass, modulations and filtering you added, but not the melody which I found boring even though you introduce that second bass at a point.. mixdown is sucky, levels are somewhat off, you have almost no high-end of frequency range. but it's not that bad and it certainly helps if you can hear for yourself that it needs more work. not sure if this structure is working, the slow part came a bit sudden, then a super-long breakdown until the end, no real drop or change of some kind. it's shoddy all over, but not particularly bad. __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 26-01-2006 07:41 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Please notify a moderator when uploading a newer version, so we can delete the old one. __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 26-01-2006 09:07 TuffDread Mr. Tuff Registration Date: 26-04-2005 Posts: 216 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for the review Cynik! Aint gonna make no excuses this track sounded worse and worse the more I played it. It should be getting more intresting, I aint gonna change it no more i'm sick of it. lol. Just posted it because I said I would. working on a new tune at the min, bit of a roller trying to set my track out properly. __ 26-01-2006 09:28 PEAHEAD Wicked Producer Registration Date: 27-07-2005 Posts: 416 Helpfulness rating:  yes yes jamie. finished nice track good structure. n keep workin on ur reeces m8. ur gettin there not got much to say cuz ive already tld u evrything wen i see u yesterday. wel get tht roaly track done itz prettey crisp so far 26-01-2006 11:57 dYzeaZe Blighted Mind Registration Date: 25-12-2004 Posts: 414 Helpfulness rating:  I hear Absynth 2 presets. Can't judge objectively now. __ Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig. 27-01-2006 17:28 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  i don't give shit bout the absynth presets intro sounds kewl ooh i hear dj funk samples (woow ; yeah ) but i must say this track don't really get me going i ain't got a single word more to say m8 just try an not exploit ur melody that much that's kinda the main problem to me lol i like the "end " speech synth (FL massive ) keep at it dude __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 27-01-2006 18:09 oplin Newbie Registration Date: 20-01-2006 Posts: 7 the vocals get really old really fast, i would ditch them all together if it was me im diging the amens, i rell like the edits at the end of the song a little diffrent them alot of edits you hear so much of i'm really digging the melody and the reese but it could use some sub behind it i also like the pad at the begining of the the tune it sounds kinda like an old school west coast g'd wistle over all i think if you got rid of the slowed down part and and the vocal, while adding more sub and a few more atmospheres, you would have a proper masher. __ www.seattlednb.com 20-03-2006 08:41 deafo Cool Tourist Registration Date: 28-02-2006 Posts: 27 at first listen i think this is really cool. i agree with some of the comments about it getting a bit monotonous. But then...at 3:00 i heardsomething that really caught my attention. that bouncy acid sound. i think i have it as a preset on the junglist vst. anyway, its well dope. if your sick of the tune i'd say recycle this one into a new one concentrating on some crazy acid basslines. actually when i get the time i might do one on that idea, if you dont mind? i love that sound. it could be like acid-gabba into mad beats and bass. 20-03-2006 09:15 rosc0 Newbie Registration Date: 25-04-2006 Posts: 5 i think that its sound pretty good, it does in my opinion need a little bit more bass behind it, and maybe like said before the ooo-yea bits are maybe in a bit to much, or maybe a bit of a change in pitch in the ooo-ing and yea-ing would be better, i dont know, good tune tho. 25-04-2006 11:50 stiffer Producer Registration Date: 06-10-2007 Posts: 60 sample at first reminded me of spacejam by logistics. a bit weak imo the beats sit too far back in the mix and the little woo sample really started to get on my tits. having said that i like the editing of your amen round 3 mins. the track though for me is just a wee bit too boring. if the beats were thicker with more layers and there was a bit more melodic content it has the potential to be a decent track 16-10-2007 12:01 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » jfuzion - NuComer - (FINAL EDIT)