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DJ Klippa 
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This is part of a 4 track EP named after the elements you find in rpg games etc, Water, Wind, Fire and Earth. I finished this last year so I don't think I will do any more to it, the only thing it could maybe do with is a little more low frequency bass but the sound quality is good loud as it is. This track is based around one riff, the intro sounds/pads and the bass are all the same but changed around to keep the track fresh. I had some party flashbacks and put some horns in there too. Here is the link. C()()()
http://www.drumnbass.be/vote.html?d=1&id=85
This track has been deleted. Reason: cleaning up old tracks
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16-08-2003 11:51 |
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Surya
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A few things I don't like about the track:
- The melody has been used soo many times. It's not fresh, and this results in the track sounding unoriginal and boring.
- The sound of the bassline: Sounds too much like a digital distortion effect (which it probably is?). This makes it sound like a bassline you would create on a gameboy or something.
- The bassline sounds out of key at moments.
- You play the exact melody with the hits at the exact same places as your other melodies. This doesn't add to the variation off the track, hence making it sound boring sooner.
Don't get me wrong. The track isn't bad overall. The buildup is quite decent, and the drums are nice (altho u use the same variation all the time, more variation here would be welcome aswell). So if you would have maked the sound of the bassline phat, and if you would have used more different melodies, the track would be much better imo.
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16-08-2003 12:31 |
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Don-E-Fresh
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Registration Date: 16-07-2003
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this track makes me want to play uper mario bros
sorry mate not really diggin the sound of this one
you got a decent structure in there, just not enough creativity imo
drums are ok
what's that horn doin in there?
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17-08-2003 00:41 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Don-E-Fresh
what's that horn doin in there? |
Yeah, sounds a bit out of place, doesn't really fit with the rest of the track.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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17-08-2003 09:14 |
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DJ Klippa
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I object to that, the horn is what makes the first break different from the final break, and if you play it rather loud it gives a nice pins and needles effect down the back of the neck. I'll upload some of my new stuff for you to check out soon. C()()()
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17-08-2003 11:12 |
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psychotic! KEEP UP
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“For the moment anyway, political philosophy is dead”
— Peter Laslett, Philosophy, Politics and Society (1950) 
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