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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'TNT' and post your comments here!!!
Yo itz peahead here posting greyone his track because he wasnt able to upload
its hardstep
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09-01-2006 15:16 |
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PEAHEAD
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time for a review
them vocals at the start fit nice. but i would say that the drums in the intro sound a bit empty. that bass build up sounds nice man and the atmosphere there is real nice. ohhh tht build up rinsis out. the drop is hard n ruff thts wat i like to see. some of the elements in here sound phatt man. this is some good shit propa hard step as i say again the vocals are crisp. 2nd drop very nice, ur drums are good wel very good and jus the way they are set out is phatt. them hardocre kicks reali set the tune off.
tht TNT vocal could mabye do with a little bit of work to make em fit the mix a bit better. nice work cuttin them drums. the snare builds sound real good also. that filterd bass sounds just like it should.
4.44 drop is wel built up and dropped but the only thing i wud say about this track is it dosent flow mabye there is to many break ups or somthing. i dnt reali kno but i listend to the track when it was 70% complete and sinse then it has improved alot man. neways keep on producing...
Peace 
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09-01-2006 15:34 |
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Rudeone
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dont have much to say. nothing very special but the tune works!! runnin in rotation here.
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09-01-2006 15:55 |
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Surya
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Cool track with some major EQ problems. The bass part is seriously lacking except for them interrupting basskicks (which are sick by the way). The amen sounds like shit. verry muddy! Most of the time there's a bit too much stuff going on, which makes it messy. Clean it out a bit!
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09-01-2006 16:26 |
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Greyone
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i have serious EQ problems , and compression overdosis ... pff
fruity sucks in EQing , definatly for hardstep , thats a fact ...
just dont look at the eqing 
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09-01-2006 16:44 |
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Alright man. Havent reviewd anything in a while. Been so fucking busy.4 gigs in the space of 10 days, and Im playing again in a couple of weeks too. But I like your other stuff so I thought Id get back on it. Nice epic intro, adds some nice mood right at the start. Has an almost film like quality from those lilting chords. I like the bass tone that comes in, nice and full. This sounds fat dude. I think the build up could be a little more obvious so that the drop really punches home. The mix is pretty shoddy, but I noticed that you already made a point about it so I wont add much, just that the drums are kinda muddy, not enough high end for my likeing, the snares dont crack enough. But the synths sound cool, possibly a little to much low frequencies in there. If you played this through a rig you'd probably loose a lot of the power because of the swampy low stuff. You should be able to sort this out pretty quickly. There are some cool drum edits going on and enough to keep the track interesting all the way through. I would have liked a more drastic change for the second section but that is just me. Another good one, you must spend most of your time writting tracks cause there nearly always a new one of yours, good on you!
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09-01-2006 18:40 |
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Greyone
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uhu allmost daily , im addicted to fruity
i just want to EQ propery 
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09-01-2006 18:48 |
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wreakon
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this ill be massive once you fix the sound!
everything sounds dull??.. what do you have running on you master channel?
you must be able to get a good parametric vst if you dont liek the fruity ones
nice tune though.. look forward to a new version
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09-01-2006 22:28 |
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Greyone
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i want to collaborate with somebody who does now the mighty EQing
if anyone is interested ... ask me for the flp. file & EQ my track
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09-01-2006 23:11 |
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PassDa J.
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The intro is nice, sphere is cool with them horns inthere, sounds movie-like indeed ...
1:00 is awesome, love that bass ...
Drop is pretty strange but nice, though I must say the drums after the drop sound less powerfull than the drums in the drop ... I don't sense allot of power inthere ...
Allot going on in this piece, and it doesn't sound good all the time cause of the eq-ing, I would be a bit calmer with the number of samples I use, asspacially when you don't know how to eq ... just like me 
pretty fucked isn't it ...
Nothing special in the outro, not so bad ... just a lil' detail ...
I would just say the "power" of the song is not that good, just like peahead mansioned ...
Anyway, nice job, always digging this ...
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09-01-2006 23:23 |
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wreakon
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Originally posted by greyone
i want to collaborate with somebody who does now the mighty EQing
if anyone is interested ... ask me for the flp. file & EQ my track
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i suck at eqing but im sure if you went though each sample and carefully boosted the high end it would sound alot better. Just try not to over do it 
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09-01-2006 23:37 |
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anf0 D
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lol yeah those bass kicks are sick... need the rest of the tune to sound as phat as those.
intro works well. def some eq probs but u will work on that wont u ;P
i think its all sweet... just need to eq it better. nice mental tune.
keep up the good work on sounds n arrangment, just keep workin ur eq skills, maybe do some research 
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09-01-2006 23:47 |
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Jesus Greyone!!,...you ain't fucking around man,..this shit's a masterpiece,...Didn't like the TNT vocal at first,..but fell in mad love with it right after the drop,..thing's do get a tad messy soundin at part's, meaning to many sound's goin down at once imo,...massive bass alert
---->1:32!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,.......TNT vocal add's beutifully man,..give's it the Greyone touch!,...god dam,...your bass is soundin pro man!!!...whatever you did with eq dist ect. on it,..is perfection!!,..<---meaning the massive bass allready noted-->1:32 for example....Anyway this is some impressive shit man!,....well done,..cheers!
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10-01-2006 06:20 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by wreakon
everything sounds dull??.. what do you have running on you master channel?
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you must know i made the song with 2 compressors , but when i saved it and listened to it , it sounded to quiet for my opinion , but the compressor where needed to keep everything in control
so i put the song again in a flp file and started mastering ,
, then i used in my master channel:
-loudness vst to crank it all up
-fruity parametric EQ to set the high end a bit , but it couldnd be fully or it would sound twice as muddy as it sounds now.
-another compressor
-reverb (10%)
-stereovst to keep everything above 500hz in stereo
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you must be able to get a good parametric vst if you dont liek the fruity ones |
yeah the parametric vst from fruity is to limited ...
its just the fucking compressors who fuck my work up , but i need them to set the velocity as loud as possible
i need serious EQ help before i can improve any more
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10-01-2006 12:37 |
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wreakon
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Originally posted by greyone
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Originally posted by wreakon
everything sounds dull??.. what do you have running on you master channel?
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you must know i made the song with 2 compressors , but when i saved it and listened to it , it sounded to quiet for my opinion , but the compressor where needed to keep everything in control
so i put the song again in a flp file and started mastering ,
, then i used in my master channel:
-loudness vst to crank it all up
-fruity parametric EQ to set the high end a bit , but it couldnd be fully or it would sound twice as muddy as it sounds now.
-another compressor
-reverb (10%)
-stereovst to keep everything above 500hz in stereo
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you must be able to get a good parametric vst if you dont liek the fruity ones |
yeah the parametric vst from fruity is to limited ...
its just the fucking compressors who fuck my work up , but i need them to set the velocity as loud as possible
i need serious EQ help before i can improve any more |
dude... youve got to simplify man! lol
i would never put reverb on the master channel.. if you really have to make sure its bright as possible. it might be the cause of some of the dull sound??
also i wouldnt have any eq on the master channel.. as tempting as it is. Best to split up your tune into as many chanels as possible and eq there.
do you mix down then load it back in? i wouldnt bother aye. Just get it right in the first place. It makes it way easier to make adjustment later too
ive spent ages fucking round with different compressors but they always fuck up my dynamics when i try to use em on the master channel, even multiband. Try the waves L2 limiter works a treat, gets it nice and loud and doesnt fuckup the sound at all.
i reckon if your gona try wierd combinations of effects and compressors best to do it on individual sounds or channels wif very similar sounds, it should be alot easier to hear if it actualy improves the sound.
thats my thoughts anyways, hope it helps
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by wreakon: 10-01-2006 20:33.
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10-01-2006 18:35 |
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Greyone
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thanx for the tips wreakon , i keep that in mind for my following tracks.
bussy on the next one , right now ... fuck im addicted
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10-01-2006 23:28 |
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aight .,took me some time to come up with a review
reasons: damn this shit's tight , but damn the eq'ing is fucked
ur intro is quite nice
ur drop is fat the vocals do their thing
evrything in this prodution is fat as as mothafucka but damn that eq takes away lot's of the tracks good qualities
(altough i must say it sounds great on fucked up 2.1 speakers
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anyhows my advice in ur future productions try watching the dB meter a bit more
bluvn gaaaaaaaaaan
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12-01-2006 17:03 |
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baz
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Originally posted by greyone
yeah the parametric vst from fruity is to limited ...
its just the fucking compressors who fuck my work up , but i need them to set the velocity as loud as possible
i need serious EQ help before i can improve any more |
7band is the shit not the parametric
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