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anf0 D 
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Please check out my new track 'Insignificant' and post your comments here!!!
128kbps-4.74mb-5m10s
dark tek steppa stuff.
all done in orion pro.
fairly early in the making. i would like some feedback n some ideas and things pointed out.
cheers
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09-01-2006 09:40 |
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wreakon
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oh yeah!! intro is bouncing 
drums sound real nice! (just closed headphones though)
nice taste in sounds. Sub bass is phat as.
that hi freq melody in the intro could maybe use a bit of pitch bending
expecting a big drop! break down a but sudden... nice build. hmm a bit flat. Shakers are annoying and harsh sounding.
It kinda feels like the intro had as much energy as the drop. I think if you gona that kinda intro you need step it up a significantly at the drop.. hard to do 
I dont reckon just adding the bassline in enough. Prob sound better with speakers though. Maybe a longer breakdown with no bass leading up to it would help, or high pass bass.
dam good start though anfo.. lotsa potential for sure.
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09-01-2006 11:47 |
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cynik
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09-01-2006 16:14 |
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Greyone
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hard drums on the intro , maybe start with pure ambi n builup slowly , nice fx on the drums.
buildup is cool , maybe add a silence before actual drop
nice techsteppah , maybe some bass fx changeups , like changing to agressive distortion n high reeces.
wow yeh the changup has reached , evilness 
maybe some more samples like bleeps n stuff ...
soundquality is nice too
overall could use much more samples imo
good one tho
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09-01-2006 18:43 |
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Halph-Price
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the drums in the start are really dull, as with most of the mix aafter that.
the bass is masked int he intro mostly.
there after 1.00 the drums get brighter, into
the drums are so far int ehb ackground,w tih some good one hits layerd ontop. kinda nice setup, but whne you have other loops cum in as variation there much too quiet. the tramen, or firefight.
wow
so thats why it's so dark my meters say allt he freq die at 15k!
oy. doubt most f the clubber notice, HAHAHA.
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09-01-2006 21:49 |
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wreakon
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yeah 15k is too low.. ive noticed professionally produced stuff gets cut about 18k. Im not really sure why though??
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09-01-2006 21:55 |
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anf0 D
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cheers for reviews guys...
yeah 15k is high freqs aye 
i dunno i keep my highs low because i notice alot of released stuff doesnt have the high freq power as say techno does.
yeah i dunno what ill do with this one... ill probably rework the intro and make it better, because its fairly shit atm... and the break. and fix up some shit u guys pointed out...
cheers.
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09-01-2006 23:06 |
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Darkside
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well you don't have to mixdown your tracks exactly as released stuff is.
drums are kinda boring, but it's a fairly good beat.
i dont really like the synth sound being used to play the melody in the first part there.
your synth sounds, all of em, just seem dull and without life...
everything is kinda looped over and over and it gets really boring.
the whole song is as minimal as the intro...never gets too much louder than that.
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10-01-2006 02:26 |
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by Darkside
well you don't have to mixdown your tracks exactly as released stuff is.
drums are kinda boring, but it's a fairly good beat.
i dont really like the synth sound being used to play the melody in the first part there.
your synth sounds, all of em, just seem dull and without life...
everything is kinda looped over and over and it gets really boring.
the whole song is as minimal as the intro...never gets too much louder than that. |
yeah im with u on that.... synths are fkn shit in this.... i just wanted to try layering stupid firefight beats and get a full sub sound. the rest was just half assed.
thanx for enjoyin hypoxic
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10-01-2006 23:09 |
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Squash Bot
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Track sounds lowpassed! More than enough bass and mid, but no high end? Maybe one of my sensors is broken? Nope, system check says everything here is still working fine, so it must be your track.
Not a bad basis, but gets repetetive quite fast. The bassline is too simple. Add more switchups!
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