short-wave - inner fear (preview)

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short-wave - inner fear (preview)

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short-wave short-wave is a male

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Please check out my new track 'inner fear' and post your comments here!!!

many plans are to draw out the main body and make changes and progressions fit but...
i want to know if i should introduce a new lead instrument or elaborate on what i have...neuro congos are in the works as well... i was in a bit of a hurry so i did not clean up some of the samples to the pro level... does the bass rumble to much?...will sidechaining my drums to the bass to a compressor make the "punch" come out in the subs? this technique is new to me and i have not tried it as of yet... thanks for listening... peace

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by short-wave: 08-01-2006 00:46.

08-01-2006 00:26

cynik

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intro is ok, I like that swoop synth. or whatever it is

doesn't go much from that which is a shame. from it alone I imagined a neurofunky bassline raped by frequency sweeps and whatnot. I would morph that swoop into a mean bass.

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does the bass rumble to much?

I can't hear any, even when I maxed the bass on my amplifier. so theres no need for sidechaining right now. it would help if the kick got drown by bass, to make it fall down in volume

cool intro

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08-01-2006 10:08

short-wave short-wave is a male

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yeah, i need to work on the body of the track much more than i have. many options have been explored, but nothing has settle down... i should have waited to post the complete version in a few more days... i will be getting to soon. thanks for the listen.

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09-01-2006 08:00

D2o

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the intro is cool....
some of the sounds are good...but need cleaning up....
the drums sound quite good but the two loops don't always seam to gel together......chop them up tighter
where is the bass??? Big Grin

the idea is there just needs refining......and it only a short clip.....

looking forward to the finished article
Bigup

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09-01-2006 10:59

Friscko Friscko is a male

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Intro is nice
The drop get's it's effect, but that sweeping sound u using, don't like it...
I'd use some very dirty reese for it, like in Vicious Circle's Doom Train.
there's need for more low, there's almost no bass (boost 50Hz, it works and gives wicked results Tongue

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The break is quite ok..

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14-01-2006 12:33

Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male

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Nice cold industrial feel to this one. Some electric bonesaws and helpless people screaming would fit nicely here. No bass rumble at this end, don't know about side-chaining. I would add some more elements here, but you could just as well go with what you have, a question of personal taste I guess.

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02-02-2006 15:28

mahwaynah
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Sounds good to me. Could do with being LOUDER! Interesting overall; thought some of out sounded a bit empty but then change my mind. Keep at it.

30-10-2007 21:47

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