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PassDa J. 
Sliced Slasher
Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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Like the intro ... chill beat ...
Ok you used some strange samples here, not really dnb-like, it's like you used an old guitar jingle they used in old fight-games 
you know what I mean? ... The SEGA rock'n'Roll music 
I like that melodie here, the 2 sounds u used fit perfectly and sound kinda cool ... maybe pull the volume down a bit so the drums come a bit forward ... nice sound quality though ...
A lil' variation in the drums wouldn't be bad ... this sounds a lil' Dubrain Hertz like 
he also uses unnatural shit ...
Ok, I respect the style you have, looking forward for more of this as I like freaky stuff ... always made by sick minds 
Later, PDJ 
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03-01-2006 17:19 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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good panned ambient inhere , drums were a bit too slow for my opinion.
whats the bpm ? 170 ? Good for the elektro genre , if you want to make it more dnb-ish you should try 180
the subbass from the kick is to heavy , cut that part off (the low end)
Elektro melodies inhere , kinda cool but i get dizzy from all the panning lol
Ambient is verry nice and fits well togheter with the other sounds.
this i defenatly more elektro than dnb , kinda 'fisherspooner' , but its great when you combine the two styles togheter.
a better structure would sound more nicely
and some more variation
and some more effects , buildups and the usualy finishing touches.
but
touché! its a nice beat , i liked it.
Keep on producing .
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03-01-2006 21:23 |
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ico26
Producer
Registration Date: 05-01-2006
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hi
this different its ok think i will like after hearing a few things
here a few pointers which mite help
frist the tune needs a lot more bass it has no subass that i can hear it mite be a good add just a bit at bits in the song just to give it a heavyer feel
also you need to use better samples the ones you are using are a computer games sounding
the main problem is getting good samples maybe try making some your self or adding more fx to your mix
on the whole the melody very good just needs a bit more bass and sub
good work
I.C.O
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05-01-2006 03:17 |
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I give it 5 out of 10...it's so so
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01-02-2006 08:29 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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hmmmmm
slow.... tempo matches the atmosphere though.
good panning on the synth that comes in and like the variation on it with the hits later on
not enough reverb and fx on the instruments an the pace lacks energy
basic sounds but i like the melody of the track
my advice is to re eq the whole thing
try n get away from that 'preset' sound
cheers
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01-02-2006 08:35 |
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xplosion
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Registration Date: 10-09-2005
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thanks for the comments everyone, I learned that I should work more on the sounds, the mix and the structure. the bass sound is indeed a preset of the a1-vst plugin. i have some questions:
is it good to put reverb on the bassline ?
what should be the compression setting for the bassline ?
how can i let the hats sound more clearly, which frequencies do you guys adjust most of the time ?
thanks !
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01-02-2006 15:35 |
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