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Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Don't Keep No Lies ' and post your comments here!!!
i made some techstep/trancestep/hardstep
dunno about all the female vocs i used , what'dya think about it ? should i drop em ?
bpm 183
320kbs
thanx for checking my track!
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02-01-2006 17:45 |
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chill intro (bit short tough)
vocals sound nice 
, do not take em out
aah there's the actual drop
fat shit man 
love when it changes at 1:50 (vocals there work real nice but could be turned up a bit)
2:40 this is where i really like it
dig the offbeat keys i hear in the back here
drop here is 
nice work
yeah an it kinda stays fucking sweet till the very end
nice work grey
vettiG 
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02-01-2006 18:14 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by greyone
dunno about all the female vocs i used , what'dya think about it ? should i drop em ?
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KEEP them but fuck them up a little
beats are well if not a little dry. but that is your chopping style. I still think you could at least layer more rolling ones beneath
basslines are wicked. I'd insert a creeping highpass reece here n there.
you could have done much better at 2:58 part, it's a very important moment for inserting a twisted turn of some kind before you let all hell loose when it drops..
bored me a little bit towards the end.. Im deffinite about that part..
it's a good track that could use a couple of changes to become great
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02-01-2006 19:29 |
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Glim
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simple intro, like the beatz, bit tinny though imo..
could jus be these shit headphones im using at work, anywayzzz
good screech sound
drop sounds a bit empty but the ideas are fuckin ace, great fresh feel to it, second (main) drop is very trancy/ravey, not my style at all
3:01 startin to get interested again...
now this drop i like, real dirty and the hits at the end of bars are exactly where i'd place em, nice stuff
well overall theres too much variation IMO but its better than i can do so wot the fuck does my opinion count??? 
nice tune eq is a little tinny for my liking will listen to it again on my system when i get home..
thanks greyone, i was expectin someting different from you and this surpassed that by miles..
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03-01-2006 03:56 |
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PEAHEAD
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alrite grey one this has a nice feel right from the start. the vocals fit wel i dont kno wht ur talkin about... takin em out thts crazy talk man. i ent reviewd one of your tunes for a long time mate. but here goes drop at 1.13 nice oh tht lil bass line tht kiks in is nice. them snares (dddddd) sound crisp. drum edits are sick. tht melody at 156. is a lil outa place. mabye cut some of the highs out of it. or turn it down a little. bass at 3.00 thts nice man sounds well crisp here.
3.19 tht drop is fukin rinsin man, i like ur stuff man and i always have. if u stick to it u will make it. bout 4mins fukin hel tht has some real nice bass propa ruff distored, thts wat i like to see as i say again. good work on the drums they dnt get reppetetive or nething.... the outro also fits well.
good work m8 keep this shit up...........
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03-01-2006 08:19 |
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Greyone
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wow
thanx peepz , thanx for checking out this tune.
I agree with all the comments , glad you noticed the things i oversaw
maybe i'll finish this one , i dunno..
cause i never finished a track yet , i always want to make new ones , better then previous.
anyway , i hate myself for putting 3 different genres in one track , cause it depends on my mood...
i started with techstep , then suddenly i wanted to make trancestep from it , but decided to make it a little more usual -greyone- hardstep LOL
thanx again , and i hope i'll stun you the next time with something better 
6R3Y0N3
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03-01-2006 12:44 |
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PassDa J.
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Yeet Greyone ... cava?
Ok, lets check this monstah out ...
Like the intro, I hear the quality is good and the atmosphere is there ... isn't that a "swamp-sample"?
The first drop is nice, but I expected something more heavy after the drop, that bass is to quiet ...
1:55 like that shit man, real bouncy shit ... you put allot of variation inthere ...
2:40 another cool sample, you use allot of sounds like this, what kinda sound is this? Sounds underground 
3:20 Niddigheid, aggressie, skwonneee like that heavy shit ... and you say you have doubts about those female vocals ... I don't, didn't even cross my mind of not fitting in there ... coolness ...
Westcorner Posse represents again 
Proper, PDJ
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03-01-2006 17:46 |
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03-01-2006 22:55 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Yeet Greyone ... cava?
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ja ca va
, merci
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isn't that a "swamp-sample"?
2:40 another cool sample, you use allot of sounds like this, what kinda sound is this? Sounds underground
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dunno how i made that sample sound that way
, not a swamp sample , just something i rendered and re-used again with some fx , layers on it , ...
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04-01-2006 11:38 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
P.S can i remix it?
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dunno ... yeah ok ... if i can remix that massive tune of yours "Re-Start"
and teach me how you EQ/Filter that bass , im so fucking yealous
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04-01-2006 11:43 |
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Lady Luxx
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Not bad Not Bat
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04-01-2006 11:48 |
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ico26
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hi
likeing the tune nice bass but here a few points which i think mite help
frist the bass lines are very nice n hard have you though of having a break part where you drop the drums out n have some strings and then bring a bass line in n bliud it up with the main vocal line
also how about making the vocal a bit loud more in your face so they leap out n make the tune more catchy
also try to bring more of a main meldoy line in there
but on the whole a top class tune
keep up good work
I.C.O
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05-01-2006 02:39 |
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Dj Kemix
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"Amazing Audio."
~Kemix
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06-01-2006 01:30 |
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BAD MAD MAN!
I Have to drop this in a care home.
Intro fooled me I was expecting light and airy
Love it at 1:56 it has a early thunderdome feel
2:36 A thunderdome hook for sure But I like that
3:20 What the fump Man.... you where dropped on the head as a child and it had possitive effects Bring on the darkness
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07-01-2006 21:58 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by psychcotiklaus
BAD MAD MAN!
I Have to drop this in a care home.
Intro fooled me I was expecting light and airy
Love it at 1:56 it has a early thunderdome feel
2:36 A thunderdome hook for sure But I like that
3:20 What the fump Man.... you where dropped on the head as a child and it had possitive effects Bring on the darkness |
hahahaha
yeh bwoy , i used to listen to some thunderdome shit haha
and yes...
i bumped on my head , two years ago (2004) on a fucking party:
i drunk tequilas n pure martinis n beer n spliffs n ... i fell from a stair ;; and i bumped my head badly
tanx fo comments
my new track is ...better and harder , expect some good shit 
ps : I WANT A LABEL !!!!!!!!
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08-01-2006 02:31 |
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Nick ZZ
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Dig the intro, like the vocals; pretty dark! That cheese synth just smashed my dark mood. 
It's a bit too Happy Hard Core for me. 
Like the synth in the second Verse! The drum variation is good! 9/10* Z
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26-01-2006 18:04 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
Dig the intro, like the vocals; pretty dark! That cheese synth just smashed my dark mood.
It's a bit too Happy Hard Core for me.
Like the synth in the second Verse! The drum variation is good! 9/10* Z |
i really ain't tryin' to offend no one but hell no....that synth(or sample whateva ain't nothing like happy hardcore
you acctually ever checked one of them happy hardcore cd's ?????????????)) nah m8 this ain't happy harcore-ish @ all ; it's experimental for it's not brought on a monotone ; overpitched disorted bassdrum
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26-01-2006 18:25 |
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mahwaynah
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Wow....loads of ideas spinning about. Keep on top of them and it'll be mind blowing, (try and make it sound like one coherent piece that knows where it's going)...already a lot of the way there!
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30-10-2007 21:53 |
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Halph-Price
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massive track, that's awsome. the bass in the drop is a bit muffled and not bass enough. but the build up and idea for the track is awsome.
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