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Hidden identity 
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Please check out my new track 'Sent-forth' and post your comments here!!!
Heres my latest hard-core rave sort of experiment.
12/31/2005.
Do you like any of it?
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31-12-2005 09:05 |
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BattleDrone
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You describe the tune as an experiment, so I´ll keep that in mind. I like the idea to do something completely different for a change..
At 23" there´s somekind of click which is -imo- not intended to be there. 
I´m not really font of the stabs that jump in at the end of the intro, they seem a bit off and could use a little boost (reverb?). I would change the filtering so the instrument comes out better at it´s first appearance.
The bassdrum is not ´sick´ enough, I would use a different one or layer it. The drums could use some extra punch altogether.
I like the middle piece very much. This recalls the first album of Apollo 440 which I liked a lot. 
The hoovering bass around 4:30 could use some reverb, sounds a bit to limited now, especially when the high melody pops in.
You obviously put in a lot of work to produce a track full of variation. I think this track could be neat with some extra tweaks. 
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31-12-2005 11:03 |
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cynik
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you got my freshest morning ears.. first review in 2006.. cheers
ok love the intro pad, except for that awful pop
drums drop in, Id worry a bit for the tone of that driving snare, seems to be off key with the bass. when it gets on going it's pretty tough tho, very industrial/futuristic and that usually gets my attention anytime.
the synth at 3:06. I think I get the idea what you wanted... it's maybe to "in your face" so some velocity automation might do well there
again, love the sci fi breakdown which follows at 3:43
missing some verse/drop structure.. but thats personal tastes..
bassline is good. I'd wrap it around a couple more reeces (modulating in frequency) and subbases to swing it into neurofunky shit a bit, cause it would fit well imo
overall I like it, nothing really bad I have to say about it.
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02-01-2006 08:57 |
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Hidden identity
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02-01-2006 09:09 |
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PEAHEAD
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yeah sounds good. if uv sorted the pop out. that drum sounds bad. it needs pahttening up alot. or use adiff rent 1. i dont like tht melody.but yeah u say itz a experemnt so yeah. keep on goin mate and there is some mayjor mastering to be done it dosent fit together well enuf. itz all over the place if u kno what i mean
peace
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02-01-2006 13:07 |
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Glim
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like evryone has said that pop needs attention.
build quite well, kind of a windy sound to it..
nice techy stabs comin in....
1:09 dude can hardly hear dem drums mate...
1:38 much better, your ideas are phat man, this could be so huge if it wasnt for that eq on the drums, the snare has too much reverb on it or sumfin, imo...
fuckin luv the grungy stabs, hits at theend of every 8 bars,
later on the snare gets phatter, keep it like that.
thanks mate, quite an intersestin venture into the more ravy side to dnb
melodies go a bit wild at times imo.
3:30 an this has to be my fav part, good percussion but can barley hear any drums over the rest of the tune.
thanks
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03-01-2006 04:22 |
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ico26
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HI
ok
here a few pointers which i think mite help the tune
frist of all the intro nice untill that acid sample comin the samples dose not fit
also when the main beat comes in it takes to long before that nice melody comes in
but the tune get better the longer it play , i feel it just takes to long to get started that all
good work
I.C.O
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05-01-2006 03:34 |
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Dj Kemix
Global Audio Recordings
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Yo..Nice Edits...
Always try different mix downs..
To See which one you like best...
Awesome Stuff Kiddo!
~EZ
You Are Very Creative....
A True Artist.
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06-01-2006 01:22 |
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Halph-Price
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the drums are poor one hits. you got like a side stick for the snare. with a hard song liek this, adnt he drums, you'd want thoes metallic, snare.s or a sample of tight snares, taht got the pang to them. you know the ones, like in marching bands. nice metallic sound
not this rim
ooh, almost vocals in it, that's pretty good.
the melody is pretty cool.
the bassline is good, andi like the pad too.
don't use the same snare for ghost snares, it always sound akward, you need to filter thoe a bit, to give them the different dynamic timber that accompanys the ghost snare.
the snares int he drop i guess.
try to use the vocal samples earlier in the song. ther ea GREAT hook, makes the song much easier. use it during or at the first drop. it's so hidden in the background. try to eq it a bit. the mid's or uper mids need a boost.
nice song.
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08-01-2006 03:47 |
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cynik
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08-01-2006 16:58 |
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