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Halph-Price 
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Please check out my new track 'Wan Yi O (Creme of Sum Jung Gi Remix)' and post your comments here!!!
Ahhh, thank you for listening to ma track, i have spent many-o-precious hours upon the track.
mostly i used the samples. a bit. in fact i used them all in there, and much much more, there really was nothing. i went more for the 'aleatoric' approach to this remix. more ambient and repeating of sturcutre.
so anyways, this track is to the best of my ability, mind and soul. i don't get the point of remixing a unfished track. THIS IS WHAT YOU GET SURYA, THIS IS YOUR FAULt, YOU MADE ME DO THIS. THE BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDs, NOT MIND! YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT, AND THERES NO GOING BACK. 
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This post has been edited 4 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 31-12-2005 05:10.
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31-12-2005 02:36 |
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cynik
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not sure about the medieval intro lol. for sure it's different. some stuff is badly off key, I guess that was the intention
stuttering beats in the buildup are ok. or it has dropped? bass enters, it would have been better if you emphasized the drop more
the diffrent snares are all lacking punch and feel too cracky
getting a bit weird in the middle part, not fond of the chaotic synth work
noise is cool. Id ditch those organs, but that seems to be the main thing in this track..
this is more an individual track than a remix, bearing almost nothing from the original..
whats 'aleatoric' ?
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31-12-2005 15:28 |
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dYzeaZe
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To be honest about it: I didn't like it. Everything is very off key. The lines are pretty simple
and plain. Has some good moments in it, but overall I wouldn't say it is very successfull and I've
seen you do much better. 
Peace.
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31-12-2005 20:50 |
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equipped
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Nice work man,..the shit don't get repetative one bit,..allway's changing,..massive shit goin down-->1:27,....sound's like you put a shit load of work into this,...nice pad's and tube soundin synth--->3:01,... 
Massive soundin base---->3:23,..add's a nice evl feel to the track,.and is pefectly mixed on my end,...this shit be crankin half price,..huuuuuuge---->4:27,..and especially-->4:34
,....nice tight edit's everywhere,...Well done man,..this to me is a huuge trake from you,..gettin a shit load better dude,..keep that shit crankin man,...cheers..
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02-01-2006 05:04 |
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Glim
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well i like the intro, nothin sound out of key to me, maybe its the shit headphones i'm using at work???
anyways, not sure bout the drums at the start, like the amen that follows.
next section ... hmm dont like dem pads over the bassline, they take away feelin
aahhh 1:47 likin the change in rythm or placement of the beatz
pads are nice here
lots of work gone into this, not really feelin it though although i luv listenin to things that i wouldnt normally produce
3:33, like the structure but the sounds are to ...erm.. dunno too ravy for my taste. 
little build up before the next drop is excellent could be used more throughout the tune imo.
shit this is complex an thats wots keepin me interested..
different which is good but not my cup o tea
thanks bro 
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02-01-2006 05:17 |
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PEAHEAD
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yeah u can tell u have spent time on this. but to be honest this is not the best u can do. ive herd alot better stuff from you. no offence. but as you sed
THIS IS WHAT YOU GET SURYA, THIS IS YOUR FAULt, YOU MADE ME DO THIS. THE BLOOD IS ON YOUR HANDs, NOT MIND! YOU REAP WHAT YOU SOW. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT, AND THERES NO GOING BACK.
so fair play m8
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02-01-2006 13:13 |
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Greyone
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cool intro , but coul be more intensive.
Samples were verry nice , but ... 
you just abuse them i guess.
I didnt like the padnotes , its a bit ... not right 
big up for the changeups just rearange the structure a bit.
Ofcoure you can do better then that .
just the wrong notes of some certain synths.
anyway nice to hear you back halph
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02-01-2006 16:49 |
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ico26
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HI
OK
the tune starts off well but then the beat comes in a the main melody gose out of tune
it dont sound good then after that the tunes gose out tunes in parts and the parts dont really fit together
you should have a look at making the melodys fit more by adding chords and bass
also try adding deeper bass as well
keep up the good work
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