Surya 
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Not my style, too funky n shit.
Drums are somewhat relaxed. I don't know if that is what you were going, but I would add more power to them.
Vocals are too loud (sometimes) so some work on the levels is needed.
Melody and sound of the bassline are somewhat dull imo.
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digitalrumble
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yeah I don't have alot to work with. I've only got one synth and no midi capability on computer either.
This is my first tune so bear with me here. J
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11-08-2003 14:05 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by digitalrumble
yeah I don't have alot to work with. I've only got one synth and no midi capability on computer either.
This is my first tune so bear with me here. J |
Ah, better than my first tune 
Now you know what I think is wrong, you can improve those things in your next tracks huh?
Keep up the good work!
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11-08-2003 16:14 |
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digitalrumble
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I'll have more choons up soon cheerz for the reedback alllways helps to have a second, and third opinion. J
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11-08-2003 19:36 |
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Dj-M@R10
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a few minutes ago i heard almost the same tune with the same sounds on this forum
a good thing to learn is when you play a minor chord, you also play the minor note in your melody, this wil make it a little bit more 'musical'
nothing more to say this was only a test
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