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Please check out my new track 'bullet from the heart (fucked forever)' and post your comments here!!!
pretty far from finished but i want to hear some opinions before i work on it any further
made it on fl5 used buzz generator an few samples
spent bout 3hours on it
feedback apreciated
cheeerz
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26-12-2005 13:03 |
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cynik
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alright man tha illbient intro works well. expected full on hip hop to drop in..
then I remembered this is from dnb.be 
anyways very good drum programming, some cool touches around the beat witrh the ghost snares etc... sound quality could be a hell lot better as you probably already know. second beat which enters is maybe a tad loud. edits sound good..
I'd hide the main beat in the buildup to pack it full when it drops with the bass. don't really dig the distorted kick thing.. but thats personal preference so it can be ignored as a comment anyway...
yeah the bass could be more "round", you can do that with an eq, notch the high frequencies and give it a slight boost at roughly 60-80hz as it doesn't punch enough now, I like the sound how it stabs though
structure could be better too, it seems theres loads of parts which are way different than others, sounds as another track entered abruptly in the mix. this is an early preview so theres room enough to develop certain parts, such as the bassline and beats after the first drop and make the track focused around that.
you show much improvement in this... keep at it
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26-12-2005 17:58 |
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baz
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thx for reviewing dudes 
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27-12-2005 00:05 |
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equipped
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Yeah man,..different for shure,..i allway's dig different... 
--->3:27 on is fucking tight man,.(not that the rest ain't 
).well done on makin the shit so phat soundin,..Your amen's choppin is classic man,..sound's brilliant at-->3:27,...At ->1:37,..the amen's don't carry on there own to well...maybe layer another break or two in with what's allready there,..one with bongo's would sound good.....that be one huge soundin sample at-->00:22,.... tune's crankin man,...lovin that big beat-->2:57!!!....almost tribal soundin....track kick's ass....cheer's...
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27-12-2005 18:55 |
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baz
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Originally posted by equipped
Yeah man,..different for shure,..i allway's dig different...
--->3:27 on is fucking tight man,.(not that the rest ain't
).well done on makin the shit so phat soundin,..Your amen's choppin is classic man,..sound's brilliant at-->3:27,...At ->1:37,..the amen's don't carry on there own to well...maybe layer another break or two in with what's allready there,..one with bongo's would sound good.....that be one huge soundin sample at-->00:22,.... tune's crankin man,...lovin that big beat-->2:57!!!....almost tribal soundin....track kick's ass....cheer's... |
thx for the enthousiastic revieuw dude
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27-12-2005 18:57 |
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Greyone
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cool vocal startoff 
, chill IDM drums
cuttings were verry nice .
the mainsynth line is cool for some time but not for the whole time .
there should be more sounds n ambient in it .
soundquality seems to be ok big up for the improvement baz.
oh and , work on the structure
RSPCT 4 XPRMNTLSM
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02-01-2006 17:24 |
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Glim
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u know what when the beatz kick in they compliment the stabs really well, couldnt imagine one withoout the other.
delibrate panning on the stab sound?? it gets lost when the tune really drops.
for 3 hours work you should be proud bro,
2:14 takes away alot of the suspense built up b4 this point
like the oldskool style breaks here an onwards
2:52, excellent mate, really original, what follows sits well imo, no need for bass imiediatly imo..
great sounds, jus not enough continuity for me..
oh yeah the vocals are great against those reversed soundin pads,
stabs sound like a fruit machine/computer game, great stuff.
keep doin wot you do bro
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03-01-2006 04:04 |
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baz
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thx dudes 
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03-01-2006 16:09 |
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PassDa J.
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About time I reviewed this fucker here ...
I like the intro, sounds pretty pro cause the sound quality is good inthere, with the echo's and such ...
RUDEBWOOOOOOAI! like that sliced hiphopshit and I was pretty surprised when I heard that a mr teeny break fits quit nice into a hiphoprhytm ... nicely done ...
But the rest didn't really grab my attention that much ... but I must say the quality is good
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03-01-2006 17:27 |
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Dj Kemix
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Allll Juuuunglist!
Gotta Love Da OldskooL Flavor!
Somethin' different heh ; )
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05-01-2006 23:57 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Dj Kemix
Allll Juuuunglist!
Gotta Love Da OldskooL Flavor!
Somethin' different heh ; ) |
ty
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25-01-2006 16:27 |
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thechronic
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Track has been removed, contained samples from the movie 'Blue Velvet'.
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11-10-2006 23:49 |
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baz
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Originally posted by thechronic
Track has been removed, contained samples from the movie 'Blue Velvet'. |
hmmm ; never heard of it ; i actually got it straight from a album
it was "the psycho realm-the psycho realm (b-real's b band )
actually i'm glad it's deleted for it sucked ass
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