cynik - Wan Yi O (evil wobble edit)[part]

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cynik

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Please check out my new track 'Wan Yi O (evil wobble edit)[part]' and post your comments here!!!

ok messed around a bit with it, heres a part of it..

This track has been deleted because a new version is available

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25-12-2005 09:44

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

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introsounds pretty wicked.... but im pretyt stoned at the momeny so im hearuing things alot differnet atm lol...

i didnt rweall fallow the droip

but the drop is wicked...

and imhoneslt ytoo fucked rihft now to rewivwe...so maybe ill give a futher review late.r..

cool listen..boh
peace....

surora

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25-12-2005 09:49

cynik

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lol cool I was really fucked up too while making thart intro

yeah I didnt really follow what comes AFTER the drop. Big Grin

lol. thanks

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25-12-2005 10:00

dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male

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Intro:
Liking it, nothing bad to say. Only the high filter fadeout doesn't sound too good imo.

Bass:
Good variety, but sometimes sounds very messy and random.

Beats & Percussion:
Nice drums, very rolly time from time. The cymbals and hihats sound cheap when solo'ed.

Synths:
Sick. Good. Likin' 'em alot!

Overall it's a nice track.

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25-12-2005 10:21

Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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I thought the start was a bit of a waste of time but when it got going it was full of nice bass sounds and it ran nicely but after the short beak with the H H at 02:22 it stopped flowing and started to jerk about a bit to much for me. I think Id concentrate a bit more on getting the tune to flow a bit smother and take more advantage of those bass sounds. That snare is a bit loud but that is a matter of taste is it not. Big Grin

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26-12-2005 00:14

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Yeah that intro is tight man,..drop's got some serious chunk in it!,...thing's get a bit messy,..but hey the shit's poundin man,..and you did say you were fucked up when doin this,..if you take another stab at it sober n all,.. im shure you'll make it a huuuge smasher,...cheer's Cynik.. Bigup

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26-12-2005 07:16

cynik

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@Lightningflash: yeah, well I gotta agree with you.. it's a bit random, but it's only a part of the tune I'm working on.. for the Surya's remix comp.. expect better thought out breakdowns etc. once I upload full.. and something special for the second drop Big Grin

and the snare comment, I'd say it's not a matter of taste but of a bad mixdown

cheers, thanks for comments so far Bigup

any more?

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26-12-2005 07:18

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quote:

Originally posted by equipped
Yeah that intro is tight man,..drop's got some serious chunk in it!,...thing's get a bit messy,..but hey the shit's poundin man,..and you did say you were fucked up when doin this,..if you take another stab at it sober n all,.. im shure you'll make it a huuuge smasher,...cheer's Cynik.. Bigup

Oh with the "sober n all",..coment,..i meant sober from booze,..not weed.. Wink

,..fatty's and producin all the way!!

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26-12-2005 07:20

Hidden identity Hidden identity is a male

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it's a bit random

But its real good though, lots of variety.

If some parts are too random you can just go back to it and change up a few notes as you listen to it and before you know, its got better melody at that part.

Good good, keep up the vork.
What program did you use to make this?
Reeeeason?

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26-12-2005 13:21

cynik

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Originally posted by Hidden identity
What program did you use to make this?
Reeeeason?

yep. gonna rewire through Tracktion as always.

thanks

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26-12-2005 14:27

D2o

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nice use of the "deadline" stab...
paddy sounds are nice...
the beat filterin is ok...
the drop is cool in a throw you off guard wheres it goining kinda way.
the bass sounds (resses and wobbles) need a bit more coherence.
maybe use similar distortion and or modulation settings.
the kick seams little loud in comparison to the sub but what can i tell on these awful speakers. Big Grin

imo there is more of a cleaning up issue than doing anything to the tracks content or structure.

but it is only short so i guess you may not have spent too long at it.

keep at it Bigup

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26-12-2005 14:42

cynik

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cool, cheers..

but, what did you mean with

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Originally posted by Dj Jimmy C
nice use of the "deadline" stab...

??

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26-12-2005 18:11

D2o

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that stabby sound you have used from the samplepack sound very much like the one in Digital's track "Deadline"

i say very much like cuz i don't like to accuse of sample robbery when everyone knows of the sites rule on it Big Grin

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26-12-2005 18:58

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

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ok now that im sober and have time ill review this bad boy fully lol...

again intro sounds are cool...

yea i wasnt fallowing the drop again...

synths and stuf are cool... but it sounds like things are a bit random and dont fallow any rythm or pattern which is a deff must in clowny step lol...

sounds like yhou have a lil verb on the snares... if so turn it down a lil bit...theres a bit too much puting those lead snares a lil too far in teh back... addin verb is great for flava but not too much...

cool ideas in it...i just couldnt fallow it...

maybe throw some more patterned and more rythmic loops in there as far as basslines go...and it should come together from there...

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26-12-2005 19:19

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