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broadside 
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Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Breeze' and post your comments here!!!
bare bones of a track here . . . gonna add some vocals and sweeps and stuff, vary the beat a bit more also. slow bpm, 170, just for the production meant to be played somewhat faster.
I know I haven't reviewed anything recently, but if you leave a comment i'll be sure to reciprocate.
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19-12-2005 13:05 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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a bit rigid beats in the intro
kick which enters sounds like its filtered
strings in the breakdown a bit cheesy
the gameboyish synth has got to go IMO.. the high one
I like the main lead sound, the lfo filtered, could be a bit louder, might even try a few octaves down to work as a bassline
you can do much more with that backgrond lead sound which accompanies the bassline. and I suggest you do so, right now its like a bare organ sample or something. bassline sound itself is in a bare form too
I like the atmospheric synth that kicks in at about 2nd minute
beats not rockin enough for my taste, don't like the choice for the snare, but I like those conga rolls (?) in the beat-ends
alright this got a bright uplifting mood altogether, with some changes made it could turn nice
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19-12-2005 16:01 |
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Procleus
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Registration Date: 10-12-2004
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good breakwork in the opening, the shots are punchy, those oscillating waves give it an industrial feel. gets too poppy as in mainstream though. predictable chord changes, with dnb i like minor chords more. the breakcombo you got is stuck though. no rolls, no fills, needs to be animated. needs a breakdown early on, and some more elements more the melodies. the downstep is a good idea, but the chord progression has gotten stale by that point. first thing you want to do is evolve the timbre of those synths. the jackhammer kick drum build up is too cliche for this one. the hats before the drop are clever, but pointless. think less VGM and more deep and dark. space out those efx and then you can add more... keep trying! &)
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20-12-2005 00:54 |
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Dj Kemix
Global Audio Recordings
Registration Date: 12-08-2005
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I like your break selection, it's cool just needs variations.
That one video game sounding sample is to low quality for the rest of the elements,..IMO
For the most part this is a chill tune.
That organ doesn't fit in..again my opinon.
Try to create more variation with your patterns.
The half time edits are tizight! you just need to twist out the double time parts alil more.
Also watch your build ups...make sure they flow well with the rest of the drum edits.
Cool Material Mang...
Can't wait to hear the finished product.
Kemix
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21-12-2005 01:09 |
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dYzeaZe
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Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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Interesting intro.
Nice flow. Repetitive tho, doesn't have enough synths for me.
Strings liven the atmosphere, but it's still the same thing over
and over again.
The slow break part is goood, saves it all.
The main line is still the same, don't hear any variety.. 
Anyways, nice work, looking forward to hear the full.
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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23-12-2005 11:14 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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cool drums, they should vary more though. synths start sneaking in in a very nice way. I have a hard time deciding whether I like the main melody, or if I hate it. If I was drunk and dancing I would have loved it, that's for sure. Real nice hiphop part in the middle there.
Drum build-up at 4:19: hmmf...not so sure about that.
Overall the melodies work nicely and the drums are cool, but the track lacks power.
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03-01-2006 13:07 |
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Hidden identity
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Registration Date: 17-02-2005
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Originally posted by Dubrain Hertz
Overall the melodies work nicely and the drums are cool, but the track lacks power. |
Ever heard any of those realy candy-assed pop-songs before?...
Lack of power just means difforent people will like it. 
My freind Ryan makes powerless songs but id say hes good enough to get signed... easy-listening... damn.
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I'm trying to unfuck my sig.
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03-01-2006 13:29 |
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