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cynik
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starts off with bass, IMO that shouldnt be as it wears off and bores quickly
way slooow.. personal tastes!
not too fond of using whole loops and the sound of them is thin - did you layer them at all?
somethings wrong with the bass, that last note is off maybe. somethings off key with something deffinitely
some better drums at 2:30 as you layerd them, but they began to phase a bit although that may be your intention - didnt really like it
the flute that floats about is a nice windy touch, I like it
you got to give a rest from that bass a bit, Im at 3"20 ant it bored me inormously, just drones around with that wee change in the sound of it.. Id say get rid of it in favor of some old skools jumpy stabs
no real changes apart from the drum variations which seem exaggerated..
not that bad.. but that bass ruins it..
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18-12-2005 10:47 |
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Surya
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Not fond of your sounds and melodies. They don't sound very DnB, more like... dunno, gameboy?
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20-12-2005 15:03 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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I like your drums, reminds me of old school underground hiphop. Gotta agree with cynic though, that bass ruins it...Otherwise it's pretty cool, I'd add more drums for the sake of variation. Even though it has a lot of variation already, it feels monotonous and gets boring.
There's still lots of nice elements here, finish it.
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21-12-2005 00:50 |
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dYzeaZe
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Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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Nice drums and percussion, some sweets synths there but the bass part is awful imo,
just awful. And very repetitive. Other than that a very good one, and I'd add some low
on the beats, sounds a bit empty like that.
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21-12-2005 15:56 |
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Old skool oldskool old skool I'm raving like its 1990! Bass is a bit monotomus, but old skool never had that much happening in it, Maybe some phasing or filters on the bass to spice it up or maybe a gated effect to bring it up to date
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07-01-2006 21:25 |
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