djakwiez - lunapark (akwiezz's mike & geena fix)

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djakwiez - lunapark (akwiezz's mike & geena fix)

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djakwiez djakwiez is a male

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Registration Date: 27-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'lunapark (akwiezz's mike & geena fix)' and post your comments here!!!

my remix of a track a mate of mine skamz did some time ago. made with protools ,reason and a novation bassstation. it's an oldskool track for wich i used some breaks that are widely used in oldskool tracks coz it's a bit of an hommage to the old era.i'm about 20 hours in the track and it's almost finished , about time for some reviews

it's still a preview bounce so the mixing isn't perfect yet,but i'd like oppinions from other people before making a final mixdown.

enjoy

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by djakwiez: 17-12-2005 16:02.

17-12-2005 15:50

cynik

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starts off with bass, IMO that shouldnt be as it wears off and bores quickly

way slooow.. personal tastes!

not too fond of using whole loops and the sound of them is thin - did you layer them at all?

somethings wrong with the bass, that last note is off maybe. somethings off key with something deffinitely

some better drums at 2:30 as you layerd them, but they began to phase a bit although that may be your intention - didnt really like it

the flute that floats about is a nice windy touch, I like it

you got to give a rest from that bass a bit, Im at 3"20 ant it bored me inormously, just drones around with that wee change in the sound of it.. Id say get rid of it in favor of some old skools jumpy stabs

no real changes apart from the drum variations which seem exaggerated..

not that bad.. but that bass ruins it..

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18-12-2005 10:47

Surya

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Not fond of your sounds and melodies. They don't sound very DnB, more like... dunno, gameboy?

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20-12-2005 15:03

Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male

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I like your drums, reminds me of old school underground hiphop. Gotta agree with cynic though, that bass ruins it...Otherwise it's pretty cool, I'd add more drums for the sake of variation. Even though it has a lot of variation already, it feels monotonous and gets boring.

There's still lots of nice elements here, finish it.

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21-12-2005 00:50

dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male

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Nice drums and percussion, some sweets synths there but the bass part is awful imo,
just awful. And very repetitive. Other than that a very good one, and I'd add some low
on the beats, sounds a bit empty like that.

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21-12-2005 15:56

psychcotiklaus psychcotiklaus is a male

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Old skool oldskool old skool I'm raving like its 1990! Bass is a bit monotomus, but old skool never had that much happening in it, Maybe some phasing or filters on the bass to spice it up or maybe a gated effect to bring it up to date

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