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sparktacus
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post your comments please, I want to know if this is a good track and how it can be improved.

http://www.munzamedia.co.uk/pr3fix_music.../cornucopia.mp3

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14-12-2005 12:56 Homepage of sparktacus
cynik cynik is a male
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oh yeah? come up with some comments on other tracks here first if you want feedback..

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14-12-2005 13:06 Homepage of cynik
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Cynik could have chosen his words better, but he's right. On this forum you get reviews if you give them first Wink

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14-12-2005 16:53 Homepage of Surya
sparktacus
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well said, but fair point guys. I will post some comments for you other people making tracks.

Thanks
14-12-2005 18:09 Homepage of sparktacus
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ok sorry for the harshness. I was at work and a little pissed by my boss lol. but, yeah, to say giving is getting around here is 100% true..

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hey I was listening to your "cornucopia". nice groove you got, not my cup of tea but well produced nonetheless. the lead guitar riff felt a bit overused - would benefit of some variation, filtering is nice but some note changes here and there would greatly improve it IMO

everything seems in place. beats soundchoice works good, retro kinda
bass is very well chosen for the style, tho it feels a bit weak. a harsher LFO setting or shorter attack on the filter (depending on the method of work) would IMO make it a bit more punchy and in your face, and more dancable

I can easily see this inside a Marky mix

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14-12-2005 19:04 Homepage of cynik
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