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wreakon 
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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intro is quite loud, leave something for the drop 
nice beats though! bit too much reverb on the snare and hats. kick seems a bit loud. snare is a bit distant
bass @ 0:48 is phat!
like that sound @ 1:45 
adds alot to the track
not so much tha sound @ 2:10
some good stuff there.. keep an eye out fot the finished version
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14-12-2005 14:07 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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Pretty cool, but I'd go with some softer drums to this kind of ambience and maybe alternate with some really hard ones from time to time to keep it nice and varied.
Needs a real intro, maybe just let it go bare in the beginning, letting the drums sneak in after a while.
got potential for sure.
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14-12-2005 14:40 |
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sparktacus
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Registration Date: 14-12-2005
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hmmm, drum and bass?
Things to add - a melody / lead, maybe some vocals, and obligatory d+b effects, such as lasers, bleeps etc.
Work on layering up your simple drum pattern with some classic breaks, i.e. amen, hotpants etc. to give it theat authentic d&b feel
If you are going for dnb I would raise the bpm up to around 175.
Drums and bass are quite weak.
Dark sounds that come in after 1.45 are quite atmospheric. Bass is also quite weak and unprocessed.
A good attempt at putting a track together with different elemetns though - bass, drums, effects etc.
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14-12-2005 18:17 |
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Paki
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Interesting idea:-)
However the Fx efects are just to help a little bit not to be overused:-(
work a little more on layering and maybe arangment like intro first break then first drop etc....
But I like the idea very hard and powerfull.
Keep it up men:-)
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14-12-2005 21:49 |
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Procleus
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 10-12-2004
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nice synths over hard shots, sweet hats. very kick heavy, distorted toms at a good level, I'd gradually bring out the kicks rather than all at once, maybe twist the volumes down. cool noise freq-ing. interesting deep synth at the end, forms a new melody.
first, I'd bring up the BPM to 165-170, and occasionally swap those hats and rides with others. the melancholy of the first synths will work at a higher tempo. vary the snare more, even some rolls on occasion.
second, needs some breakdowns, and when it drops you can bring in the melody thats toward the ends.
right now this tracks in limbo, needs more grounding...
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15-12-2005 00:29 |
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dYzeaZe
Blighted Mind
Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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Has some mood to it, nice... Too simple drums in the intro, loses the atmosphere times from times.. A
nice reverby chilly track. Don't like the saw after ~2:10..
Anyways, cheers
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15-12-2005 17:29 |
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darkstar
Amateur DnB Producer
Registration Date: 11-10-2007
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This isn't DnB. Not even close.
If you had held onto that starting section for about 30 secs and then kicked it into overdrive, you would've had me sold. The drums are too distant and sleepy, the pad is good but needs to become something, along with the rest of the track.
You have something here, don't let it get away.
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18-11-2007 02:25 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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ello there.
nice work on intro ,just bit too much reverb imo,moment till pads comes again its a bit empty i think,there is defo too much reverb ,a bit more variation in drums ,maybe different break could make some good.Good dark vibe ,tension.cheers.
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18-11-2007 04:22 |
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