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stino 
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06-08-2003 16:36 |
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kyokpae
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Hi,
This tune is very monotoneus.
Until 4 minutes you play like 3 music-loops all over again and u change them at 1:15, 2:30, 3:50. After this you play everythuing once again.
Ah. Aquasky got a track in which he's stabbing only one motiff all track long but he adds some variations. You see... Your track is very dull. I can't imagine myself dancing to it.
greetz!
kyokpae
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08-08-2003 15:02 |
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stino
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Respect your opinion, only trying to learn here, you see,
don't take it all to serious man , i'm far from releasing real dancefloorstuff, i'm not really aiming that you know.
maybe check this out, you'll see what I mean
here
kinda dull track too, i'll rework it some time..;
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08-08-2003 16:09 |
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-J-
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hmm, i think your sound is quite good, sounds loud and clear, but the song itself ain't what it oughta be i think ...
it's just the same beat and some synth lines ... bring more variation, structure, tension, add some feeling to your track ...
the title is very funny tho 
, it kinda blows it all away=]
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08-08-2003 16:11 |
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stino
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Same thing for you J,
I'm still learning
Thanks for your reply, I'll keep it in mind for my next tracks
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08-08-2003 16:13 |
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08-08-2003 16:23 |
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stino
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yeah
really appreciate that.
you know, I'm only busy for a month and a half.
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08-08-2003 16:33 |
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-J-
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auwtsch, didn't know that, very fine start then, mostly first productions really sound like crap, but i think your sounds are very well levelled out, if this is what 1.5 month does i'm damn curious for the tunes you'll be making in a month or 6 
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08-08-2003 17:06 |
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stino
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have some "rocknroll" studio experience with my band, comes in handy you know. 
this is the best I did for now.
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08-08-2003 17:55 |
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kyokpae
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Originally posted by -J-
auwtsch, didn't know that, very fine start then, mostly first productions really sound like crap, but i think your sounds are very well levelled out, if this is what 1.5 month does i'm damn curious for the tunes you'll be making in a month or 6
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I'm always feard of this kind of people. They're dangerous 
greetz!
kyokpae
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08-08-2003 20:42 |
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stino
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What the fuck??
explain!
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08-08-2003 21:44 |
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kyokpae
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Have u seen Terminator I? People feared of robots cause machines were simply more efficient and effective than they. I don't have to continue, need I?
greetz!
kyokpae
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08-08-2003 22:01 |
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Surya
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Main problems I hear:
Main melody is quite dull. Don't like the sound of the synth you use either. Sounds more like a gameboy tune to mee. Also, this main synthline is way to loud in comparison too the rest.
Breaks are messy and muffled at times and don't have constant volume (or so it seems, maybe too much compression?)
Don't get me wrong, there are some good elements in here, you just need more practicing. Good start!
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09-08-2003 11:59 |
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stino
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Originally posted by kyokpae
Have u seen Terminator I? People feared of robots cause machines were simply more efficient and effective than they. I don't have to continue, need I?
greetz!
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what do you mean by that, I think you want to say that there is nothing from myself in this, that it's my computer who made this, beats and all, leveled it out, made the melody, did all the stuff I did,???
well, NO .
I made it with my computer, my computer didn't make it with me.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by stino: 17-08-2003 12:24.
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