baz - to stoned in the morning (far from finished)

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baz - to stoned in the morning (far from finished)

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baz

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Please check out my new track 'to stoned in the morning (far from finished)' and post your comments here!!!

well the tune is like it says "too stoned in the morning" Spliff

don't mind the parts where it goe s off beat cuz it was ment to
revieuws offcourse would be nice Big Grin

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by baz: 12-12-2005 13:07.

12-12-2005 13:06

Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male

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Intro ambience is cool, hihats a little sharp to my liking and the crash could maybe have been pitched down or something, sounds pasted on.

Drums coming are cool, the volumes are fucked up from time to time, lotsa cool edits though.

1:39 Nice groove.

Takes a long time before things really fall into place, but it gets better and better towards the end.

Sounds very unfinished so it's hard to say anything more, could be good stuff with some more work I guess

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12-12-2005 20:03

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Originally posted by Dubrain Hertz
better towards the end.

Sounds very unfinished so it's hard to say anything more, could be good stuff with some more work I guess

yeah far from finished edit eh Big Grin

thx for reviewing dude

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12-12-2005 21:17

Greyone Greyone is a male

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yoooooo,

intro ambient is cool.
introdrums too.
suddenly the ambient falls away , thats bad , i should let the ambient go its way , maybe some subs , reeces , vocals , sounds , fxes , ...
Drumcutting is massive , goes from breakcore to IDM , as i said before...
Stooooooongly Experimental Big Grin

conclusion , drop some tons of samples inthere.

REsPect For the Experimentalism Bigup

12-12-2005 21:37

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them amens/firefights rinse out propa. 10/10 for slicin
like greyone says REsPect For the Experimentalism

13-12-2005 10:37

baz

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thx m8

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13-12-2005 11:42

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Alright man. I like the effects at the begining. Drums that come in are pretty mental, but they sound a bit bare without any ambience, you should fill that out a bit more. This sounds a lot more coherent than some of your other tracks, there is an idea going through all of it so far which is cool. I like the high synth with delay, works well. Theres not very much here at the moment so its quite difficult to give a full review. Drums are cool but a little too random in places. Try to introduce some sort of repeated theme into them so that its a little easier for the listener to keep up with, or maybe some sort of noise to indicate where the beggining of the bar is. The ambient synth is cool, but gets a little boring towards the end, try to keep some evolution or variation to keep it from getting monotonus. This also needs some kinda bass going on. I dont think reeces would work. Some warmer, less distorted bass would work better I think. Theres a start of a tune here, it could go anywhere. Id be interested to see where you take it.

13-12-2005 11:54

baz

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cheers dude
been working about 9 hours on it (after posting this one )
an i must say it changed quite a bit already Big Grin

thx for the revieuw Big Grin

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13-12-2005 14:36

dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male

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Eeeriee intro... Random amens sound interesting with the beeps and blips but sounds very cheap when
amens start going solo, don't loose the background atmosphere in the full version! Cheers.

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13-12-2005 20:24

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Originally posted by dYzeaZe
, don't loose the background atmosphere in the full version! Cheers.

teah kinda figured it out already Big Grin

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13-12-2005 20:48

anf0 D anf0 D is a male

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ambience is good.

drums are wack...

u guys an ur wack drum edits. doesnt get me off at all. still not bad edits though.

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14-12-2005 02:14

baz

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lol
thx for review tough Big Grin

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14-12-2005 16:47

cynik

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youve improved from the last time I checked yo work Bigup

the mixdown is much cleaner

not much of an intro here, drums bashing right off the first minute

pretty bizzare, can't really comment cause Im not eligible for this kinda show

anyway, some structure would be nice like a part when you can chill out from all the bashing. theres that atmosphere fx which work well, what about some bass?

yeah, deff some evil stabs would work here. suggest you take a bare bass C note, distort and go crazy with pitching it up and down

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14-12-2005 20:12

baz

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thx for the advice Big Grin

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14-12-2005 21:43

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