 Dj Jimmy C - Unfinished Business |
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speed it up a bit.
very clean sounding, snare could do with some variation and like you said more rolls.....the filtered beat on the breakdown "sounds a bit reason" ....
b line is rolling. could maybe do with a bit more weight.
its a tune jimmy. but you should export all the parts as audio (without any processing) and let me remix it.
let me know if ya interested...you can just winzip the files and then send em via www.yousendit.com or www.dropload.com. pm me if ya interested old boy.....
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09-12-2005 16:29 |
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Hey man, bad luck about the laptop. I hope you had everything backed up! I dont know what Id do if my laptop fucked up.
Anyway on with the review. I gotta agree with munki. It needs to be sped up, it sounds like its dragging at the moment but that might be just taste. I think the bass sound is pretty limp, doesnt have any balls at all. The drums are a bit to plain at well but again this is probably just a taste thing. There are some nice elements in here but it deffinately could use some more atmospheric sounds to fill the track out. I like the section at around 3 minutes, opens out really nicely.
The main thing I dislike is the kick drums for the drops, really chezzy sounding in my opnion, its just a really over done thing.
I think the main things this tune needs are more beef on the bassline, some fuller sounding drums or more rythmic elements, and a lot more atmosphere. I also think you should find another way of bringing the changes rather than those kick drums, it such a cliche.
Not really my kinda thing but there are parts of this that I like. You should put more into this one because I think it'd be worth the effort. Good luck!
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09-12-2005 16:46 |
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tonic is a standard plug in which comes bundled with cubase sx. sounds shit. believe.
take a note.
nomad factory blue tubes.
waves gold, diamond or platinum bundles.
steinberg grm tools - now the filter in here is STANDARD! cause its dope.
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09-12-2005 22:50 |
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10-12-2005 21:30 |
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dYzeaZe
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Nice intro. Sounds cool.
The ~0:50 thing is very abrupt and bad imo 
The 1:10 goes on very nicely tho. Likin' it. A bit simple, but that doesn't annoy. Background saw
buildup thing is neat!, but you should've added something after that. Shouldn't loose the bass tho,
let it go through the entire track.
4:28 so my style 
Funny but this is something I would definetly add too.
Liked it. Cheers 
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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11-12-2005 15:24 |
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sparktacus
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nice start. The best thing I have heard on here so far. Good beats, nice pads. A.I. sort of lead into the build up.
Some good vibes at the drop, it's got that liquid / A.I/ total science feel to it. Not bad at all mate. But add some filler fx - as many as you can find. Good variations at 1.55 along with the build up sound. - more sub bass would be nice.
How about adding a vocal as well? Easier said than done, I know.
Good effort I reckon, on the right lines to becoming a finished track.
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14-12-2005 18:27 |
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PassDa J.
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Haha finally the great Jimmy made a new one, let's check it out ...
Typical JC style, always likin' this ...
Cool intro, sounds soft and gentle 
the melody is nice aspecially when the bass gets in ...
You should speed the song a bit up, cause it's a chill tune allready ...
Drumz are chill, like they allways are ... maybe some more variation ...
Ok this is not one of your best, you can hear this is not finished yet .. or made in a small time ... it also gets repetitive in the end ...
I would even say it's your worst, wich doesn't mean it sucks ...
Allright on to the next
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