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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'onyx' and post your comments here!!!
This was something i made last night when i was drunk.. and it took me only about an hour...
I was really pissed off at my ex girlfriend cuase shes playing headgames with me.. so i decided to go back to teh darkside a lil bit...
so heres a preview... enjoy the madness...
Surora
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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04-12-2005 00:17 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
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back to the darkness eh...
let's find out if i missed it.
doesn't sound too drunken.
i like the beat chops!
that stuttered bass hit thing was evil.
choirs are nice...
man, you're getting effing good.
but there are eq problems as im sure you're aware.
around when the choirs come in, the drums totally fuzz out because of too much bass conflicting in the mix.
but hey, not too bad for an hour. quite generic...but at least you can make something that sounds standard.
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04-12-2005 02:34 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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cool.. ye man.. some eq issues fo sho... lol was a bit drunk lol so...
but yea gonna work on all that mess some more...
keep em comin..
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05-12-2005 00:05 |
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dYzeaZe
Blighted Mind
Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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Nice. Dark. Likin' it. Sounds angry, but lacks some inner agression that makes a dark track so special.
Good one anyways. Cheers 
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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08-12-2005 21:21 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Cool...intro is perhaps just a wee bit too long. Drums are cool, nice and hectic. This really makes me think of a long abandoned haunted town, the intro is more like an abandoned moon-base though.
Cool
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09-12-2005 13:26 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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like it, just not clean enough to be good.
you should finish this.
the intro is too simple though, and try to make it unique....
7/10
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09-12-2005 13:50 |
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Friscko
Aron Tinnitus
Registration Date: 12-03-2005
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-Intro: there's some parts where the sound clash a bit, like at 0.03..it needs a bit of build-up imo
-Breakdown/drop: vox are ok, but i'd let the laughter before the drop idd
-beatz: they sound a bit thin to me, i'd add some low, but they're ok...
-bass: the reese sounds a bit over/ wrong distorted, i dont like it's sound
the stuff u do at 01.11 it too loud
it really sounds like it desperatly needs eq'ing...
doesnt give me a feeling of endless anger and agrassion, more like some horror/claustrophobic feeling
7/10
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16-12-2005 19:30 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by Friscko
-Intro: there's some parts where the sound clash a bit, like at 0.03..it needs a bit of build-up imo
-Breakdown/drop: vox are ok, but i'd let the laughter before the drop idd
-beatz: they sound a bit thin to me, i'd add some low, but they're ok...
-bass: the reese sounds a bit over/ wrong distorted, i dont like it's sound
the stuff u do at 01.11 it too loud
it really sounds like it desperatly needs eq'ing...
doesnt give me a feeling of endless anger and agrassion, more like some horror/claustrophobic feeling
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lol cool...
yea man for like an hour of work, the mix is absolutely horrid...lol
the horror claustrophibic feel is more of what i ended up going for i guess... cheers
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17-12-2005 23:31 |
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