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Dubrain Hertz 
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Cool intro, synth sounds like evil laughter. The vocal sample has a cool eerie sound to it, but I have a hard time trying to hear what it says. Don't like the first drums much personally. Synth coming in is distorted like FUCK! I like it.
The track has kind of a staccato feel to it overall, not really working for me, all the elements are there but I'm not too fond of the drums. Maybe there just needs to be more of them. They're at their best with the bongo-like thing in the background, with those they work pretty well.
Keep working on it.
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02-12-2005 14:49 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Dubrain Hertz
Cool intro, synth sounds like evil laughter. The vocal sample has a cool eerie sound to it, but I have a hard time trying to hear what it says. Don't like the first drums much personally. Synth coming in is distorted like FUCK! I like it.
The track has kind of a staccato feel to it overall, not really working for me, all the elements are there but I'm not too fond of the drums. Maybe there just needs to be more of them. They're at their best with the bongo-like thing in the background, with those they work pretty well.
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Thanks for the review and advice, I made 11 diff drum loops and re-arranged them threw the track. The synth was made in reason and edited in sound forge 8, we just finally got it... For the voclas I might bring them up a little and distort them a little more. Maybe I can get the drumz to flow a little better if that is the case. Appreciate the review. Z
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03-12-2005 00:13 |
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Glim
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good panning, makes for a refreshing change in an into...
very metallic drums hope there jus an intro ting..
really like the synth that follows but it aint got enough fx and grime in it sounds basic fruity preset distorted on high notes.
the drop could do with variation and more volume for the drums
dont like that high note in the synth line the melody is quite boring
hi hat is too lud bring it down in the mix a bit moe m8.
tune sounds good around the intro but you need to sort the levels out
like the percussion very funky
needs more work
thanks 
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03-12-2005 03:28 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Glimmer
good panning, makes for a refreshing change in an into...
very metallic drums hope there jus an intro ting..
really like the synth that follows but it aint got enough fx and grime in it sounds basic fruity preset distorted on high notes.
the drop could do with variation and more volume for the drums
dont like that high note in the synth line the melody is quite boring
hi hat is too lud bring it down in the mix a bit moe m8.
tune sounds good around the intro but you need to sort the levels out
like the percussion very funky
needs more work
thanks
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I will see if can get the levels to sound a bit better and work on the layers, I made the synth in Reason 3. Thanks for you review. Z
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04-12-2005 04:22 |
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anf0 D
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y0 nick n ZZ been a while since we heard from you guys.
the intro atmosphere is cool. and subs n percs... i rekon u need to fuck that reece up with a LFO or some cool filter pattern. some nice arrangment n stuff. toms were cool. the high pitch synth is cool. i think you guys need some nice powerful driving hat lines in ur tunes.
id be interested in making a remix if u guys are interested.
production seems good, although u just need to fill it out abit with sounds. i think all ur missing out on is those hats that drive it along. very important i think. and more effects use on the bass stuff. like lfo on the reece to make it interesting a fuckt up.
anyhoo thats my 2cents worth.
peace
ps. i like the art u guys put with ur tunes.
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06-12-2005 00:32 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by anf0 D
y0 nick n ZZ been a while since we heard from you guys.
the intro atmosphere is cool. and subs n percs... i rekon u need to fuck that reece up with a LFO or some cool filter pattern. some nice arrangment n stuff. toms were cool. the high pitch synth is cool. i think you guys need some nice powerful driving hat lines in ur tunes.
id be interested in making a remix if u guys are interested.
production seems good, although u just need to fill it out abit with sounds. i think all ur missing out on is those hats that drive it along. very important i think. and more effects use on the bass stuff. like lfo on the reece to make it interesting a fuckt up.
anyhoo thats my 2cents worth.
peace
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Thanks for the review, we are not 100% finished on this one, we still wanted to attempt another edit after we got a little more advice. We will be happy to here you tear it up then!!!! Please just give us a chance to edit once more. We do a lot of art, please let us know what you would like and we will tackle a artist picture or a picture for a track or a avitar or what ever you like! Z
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08-12-2005 02:57 |
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
Thanks for the review, we are not 100% finished on this one, we still wanted to attempt another edit after we got a little more advice. We will be happy to here you tear it up then!!!! Please just give us a chance to edit once more. We do a lot of art, please let us know what you would like and we will tackle a artist picture or a picture for a track or a avitar or what ever you like! Z |
no worries for the review... and understandable to wait for some feedback before you finish it.
yeah cool if i ever need some cool art done ill give you guys a call
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