Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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could use a wicked reece to fill up the sound a bit
rap is reallah nice! Like dem MC's
kick could use some more punch
sweet track tho.
keep on jammin'!
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Soi
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2nd intro synth has a nice sync-wobble.
first beat is kinda low in volume
good atmospheres
kicks and snares: cranck 'em up up up!
basslines are DOPE
melodies ar good, but there's one litlle cheapo casio-synth melody in the background: throw that away !! 
or do smt with it (other sound, fx,...)
overall eq: add mids and high's, make sure you use a good eq-setting for the vocal, it's a bit mudded by the rest of your sounds (use a mid-high mid focus)
musical track, finish it.
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29-11-2005 19:09 |
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equipped
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start of with,..this is sick!!!!!!,..think that sound at>00:10,..is too loud,..dam angry bass,...right on man,..rap's tight,..this shit get's huge after the rap,..sound's like there's a bit much delay on something,..this got a solid groove,..Well written,...flippin smasher Glimmer!!...cheers... 
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29-11-2005 23:57 |
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anf0 D
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intro sounds are cool... like the hats... kick n snare sounding phat, although could be pumpd up abit... the bass stabs are phat. the vocals are cool, and drop is phat. basslines are dope... the high pitchd reece is cool. phatty tune man, some nice raw ideas. finish this beast off f'sure.
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30-11-2005 01:04 |
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ATN
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As has been said, punch those drums at the intro...
I like the overall atmosphere of this...
The mc shit is good, but you need to cut yourself an eq hole for the vox to sit in, otherwise it sounds too muddled. Try working a hole around 5k and around 10k, and then boost there on your vox track. Compression on the vox will help lots too.
This track feels super nice.
The drums are a little weak overall, liking the little farty bass guys.
This track def has potential. Turn it out!
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30-11-2005 03:32 |
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Surya
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Mixdown has some major issues. Most of all: there's no bass!
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30-11-2005 10:10 |
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anf0 D
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30-11-2005 22:58 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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thanks for comments, always welcome.
gonna work on the drums and especially the mixdown.
this is definetly where i'm lacking in experience and knowledge.
keep it locked
G
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01-12-2005 13:24 |
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TuffDread
Mr. Tuff
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Mad tune m8 lovin it, this is how drum'n'bass should be.
The intro is good it's quite eerie and that little beeping sound with the laughter goes well, nice way to bring in the main bass sound for the build up with the "whoosh" sound.
The drum loops is good how it builds up by adding drums into it, then t breaks down to the bass and the vocals.
The break is mad, I thnk it would probably sound a bit better without the vocals tho, I think any tune with mcing on sounds very commercial some people like this. I dont, it's a matter of oppinion tho.
Keep em comin m8 cause that tune is heavy!
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05-12-2005 18:19 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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thanks mate, production wise its sucks but as for the style of the track well i dunno... i guess its just a british thing, most u.k headz on this site have enjoyed the style of my tracks more than others have??? could be wrong?????
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07-12-2005 08:56 |
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Rudeone
love & light
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wow nice thing. the voice and the production have to be cleaner though.
9/10
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07-12-2005 15:22 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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yeah when i finish my week of nightshifts i'm going to rework it and finish it
gonna scrap the vocal and try and add some live keyboard in there
thanks for listening m8
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09-12-2005 09:42 |
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Nosrac
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Good to see you still kicking around bro - I've been an infrequent flyer lately as well swamped with teaching and working on some hip hop projects with some of my students. Now yer tune: Really nice work, classic sound, nice flow and roll. Nice one on the vocals - thought this was a real MC - wait maybe you are
- didn't know that bro - sounds wicked. Drums are a bit quiet and lacking punch but the other sounds are layered really nicely and sound wicked (a classic late 90's sample in there 
) Good feel to the track but doesn't bust into a second drop - still cool track though
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17-12-2005 17:15 |
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Hidden identity
Wicked Producer
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rappin is like talking about your feelings,
and its like learning how to not be shy and talk to strangers....
it feels weird and un-natural at first,
but once you learn it you cannot forget it,
and its merely expression of self... the method of.
I see from your skill here, that you have very good potential but just a very small lack on experiance/practice.
We all want to hear more songs like these^
have a great day! thanx 4 muzak.
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18-12-2005 21:28 |
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wreakon
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sounds good to me.. only closed headphones though
love the vocal bass stabs. sounds massive in parts
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29-12-2005 06:53 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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i cant listen to this without cringing these days, just rushed it and fuckin hate the rap i did, the version i'm doing now is vocal free.
thanks for everyone who listened to it.
all comments taken on board for next time
peace
Glim 
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02-01-2006 05:36 |
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Kinexion
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29-11-2007 23:01 |
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cynik
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