 teknyne - All Nite (my dad is a trancecore dj remix) |
teknyne 
Producer
Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'All Nite (my dad is a trancecore dj remix)' and post your comments here!!!
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27-11-2005 15:20 |
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dYzeaZe
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Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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Some nice elements there. But using z3ta presets isn't something people can't notice... Too simple. 
Not much of drum'n'bass here you know. If you used tramens doesn't mean this is dnb. Not liking this, sorry.
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27-11-2005 18:27 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Is that vocal cleared????
Sound is very distorted and messy. Clean it up a bit.
The 'Let's fucking go' sample needs some work. It doesn't fit in and it's a bit too loud.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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30-11-2005 10:19 |
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Procleus
Cool Tourist
Registration Date: 10-12-2004
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Though there is definitely an audience for happy hardcore, it is a misrepresentation to put this mix on a DnB site. I can't really review this track from a DnB perspective. And its been a long time since I was into 'happycore', so I don't know what to up, what to down, whether the track will blend, etc.
So I'll do my best ... first, the 4/4 beat alienates this track, because its tempo is too high, and therefore, too dense. Its what I call a "power-hog" track, cause there's no room for blending.
Second, the sweeping pulse-line is too present, making this track "geek out". What I mean is that its so busy, it burns out people's interest too fast, and your DJ will be scrambling for the next track.
Third, the glitching of the vocal-line is overdone, which incidentally is also overdone. Vocals are like spices, too much makes it just stink.
Fourth, no bassline! No subs, nothing!
Fifth, no points for overdoing the Amen break. After ten+ years of hearing nearly every pattern imaginable, you gotta space it out or turn it down.
So in summation, slow it down at least to 180, open the track with a minute of blending material, and space out the pulse-lines and vocals, I mean really space them out, even take them out if you have to. And write a bass line!
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12-12-2005 21:52 |
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+'Valium'+
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Registration Date: 13-12-2005
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Pretty messy but i like it !! I like the fast drum 'n bass beats mixed with voices.. I don't know much 'bout making drum 'n bass, but i'm wondering, where do you guys find the vocal tunes for your tracks?
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13-12-2005 16:15 |
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this track didn't have a strong start which didn't keep me interested. When it got to the middle (around 2:30), I was really digging the more upbeat parts with the fast snare. Kudos on the rave synth too.
I would suggest you limit how much of that vocal you're using.
I wasn't too thrilled about that female voice except when it was chopping up.
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18-12-2005 06:36 |
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