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dYzeaZe
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Registration Date: 25-12-2004
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The violin-contrabass-bass sound is a bit too bassy, a little less boost on it would be great. The complex
beats are good, liked them alot. The piano part sometimes loses melodic stucture and harmony.
Well you know the rest.
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22-11-2005 10:54 |
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DJ_Fozzybear
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Registration Date: 10-11-2005
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Wassup Hidden!!!!
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I like the tone of this one, well ambient an spacey!!!
The synth in the intro needs some bass eq'ed out of it an maybe a more mid noise layered on top of it to give it extra texture.
Also there is a little glitch in the timing of your beat, a tiny clash near the beginning of the loop.
I would add another kick an snare as well to give it more definition of groove, a bit more drive.
The loops you have used would be a good ghost pattern just needs more "oooomph"!!!!
Also i would put a switch in somewhere to cut away from the pattern you have going to create some difference.
I like the ideas an concept but it is lacking in some hype for my taste.
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22-11-2005 11:53 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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Quite pretty, I hate the piano though, sounds way too plastic. Sounds like it attempts realism soundwise but it sounds like a General MIDI soundbank of some sort, also it has no dynamics and the melodies are unnatural. Sorry if I'm hard on this, but I happen to love pianos, and hate to hear them done poorly. I'd cut it down a little, the highest notes sound nice, but the lower ones does not.
Strings also needs work, they have loads of potential tho.
Drums are nice, other synths have a good mellow feel, especially the bass, good melodies. Atmosphere is cool on this track.
Keep at it
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22-11-2005 14:46 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm

Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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nice phat start synth. they keys seam to go a bit randomly. wow, thoes drums are really coooool. i sear i ahve heard thoes rattling drums sounds before somewhere... hmmm
the piano and strings part is quite nice. you inspire me to not want to do the hardest music possible. but than the big kick comes in nice... the synths after..
the drums are too soft sounding when you solo tehm out. need a bit of a fix on there transient... ness. the inital hit. just a compressor would hlep with a fast attack. nice song.
there are some aprts in the start and later on the piano seems a little "wild" and i think if you just kep the notes in a sort of scale it would help itout a bit. overall, you could have done with a bit heavier drop, even if it was just another instrument, like another piano, or a string section, with the same sound. this will help define the drop.
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23-11-2005 08:26 |
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Victom#1
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Registration Date: 26-05-2005
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Enjoyed the piano bit, while the synth sounded a bit cheap, the notes you chose show serious potential.
The overall structure seems very strange, the build of the tune is just odd.
The drum work, while interesting, fails a bit in the drum n bass dept... add some snare to the loop to really push the beat along.
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23-11-2005 12:16 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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bassy bizniz to begin with then.....
dont like the melody but its growin on me,
other melodies that come in are okay
yeah like the funky twist on that bass goin down a few notes...
eq of the drums lack punch imo, but the arranged of them is good.
piano doesnt feel tooo good but you obviously have musical talent, nice concept i enjoyed it but those drums jus arent loud enough for me
Thanks for the listen mate
G
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25-11-2005 17:02 |
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Dj Kemix
Global Audio Recordings


Registration Date: 12-08-2005
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This tune is tight....
Very different...
I enjoyed the Listen!
Cheers!
Illzzz
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26-11-2005 03:12 |
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